1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2024 03:29 am Title: Chapter 1
This style definitely works. I can take a hopeless ending once in a while. Makes it look more real.
Date: January 01, 2010 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Pretty cool, I can so see her imagining that. Except I've never gotten that comfortable in a bath. I'm good for like 3 minutes, then I get bored, the water gets cold, and all I can think if "damn, it's going to be a pain to wash my hair."
Author's Response: lol, yeah my Mom falls asleep in the tub all the time, especially when she's stressed or sick...I on the other hand can barely stay in there just like you lol
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2009 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow! that was great! even though you said in your author's notes that this wasn't as happy a piece as you usually write i thought this actually wasn't too bad. sure, pam almost drowns herself, but she stops herself, and the way she talked about karen at least gave me some hope. oh well, i guess i'm just a little relieved to see that this isn't a sad as your latest story or liv's 'she dreams in color' that i'm in love with.
nice job with the challenge, i'm giving you a purple ribbon for it (my equivalent of a blue, i just like purple better!)
and sorry if this review makes no sense - i'm a little dazed, i just realized i'm completely caught up with all my homework and it just felt weird not to have anything hanging over my head (well there is some stuff i could do... but it's time for sleep :)...) all in all, i really liked this story if you didn't get that earlier in my review!
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2009 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well-done...but you already knew that :)
Author's Response: thanks Sarah :0)
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2009 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing, you captured Pam perfectly IMO :)
Author's Response: aww thanks Hannah, glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: May 20, 2009 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor Pam, it'll get better darlin'.
10 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2009 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1
You've really captured the longing, nice job.
10 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2009 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is seriously wonderful! Really loved it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it I had fun writing it