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Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I just wanted to tell you how much I love your name (didn't really like the actual Shakespeare play much though).  As for the Josh being married thing that people have brought up, it's not like that stops men all the time (or even most, as men=pigs).

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, heartbreaking, but I could totally see this happening. And I've been so focussed on Toby being an older version of Jim, that I never noticed that, yeah, Phyllis could be and older Pam.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

definitely continue - please!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 06:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Continue please continue.  Can't leave it like that.

Reviewer: Semby Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 03:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, that's quite depressing. But believable. Great job!

Reviewer: David Anonymous 6 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good story (or start of one), but you're forgetting one thing:

Josh is married!

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, interesting pairing, and sad for the Jam factor! I love the description of where everyone would sit in the cafeteria, you've nailed them!

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooh...I like it so far. Can't wait to see where you take it.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was interesting ... Pam and Josh.  I thought I'd be more sad about it than I was, but in the context of the story, I'm not.  That's weird.  I also love --- Karen and the Bluetooth, pacing back and forth the front of the office to make her sales calls because she can't stand Kelly!  Awesome.  I can't wait to see those two try and get along.

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think you should definatly continue this.  It is very interesting and a plot that could go many different ways.   Maybe you could address Josh's wedding ring though?

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting beginning.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think that is an interesting premise.  I think you should certainly continue this story.

Reviewer: eyegypt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting, but I'm going to pretend Josh isn't married ;-) 

I hope you consider continuing it

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey, I wondered when this would come up. It'd be an interesting dyamic for Pam to be involved with someone over Jim's head (in the heiracrchy). Yeah, keep going. (I think you're missing a word in the next-to-last sentence - re-read and see).

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