9 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2009 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Pam shooting down Ryan and Jim witnessing it was one of my favorite scenes of season 4 and your story just made DMI and Launch Party even happier. I love these little behind the scenes stories and this was so well done, especially how you addressed the insecurity that both must have felt at some point early in their relationship.
My favorite part: “And yet, somehow you doubt that you are the woman of my dreams,” he said, shaking his head.
Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2009 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
even more WOW then last time! that was great, i think you know why now, or at least i hope so! i really wish you'd continue this, or start a new story about a similar situation. wait, maybe you could write a sort of follow up to this about how jim and pam are still like this throughout the years? just an idea.
okay, back to this story, my favorite moments had to be pam's speech, and then the conversation from that point to the end. ah-mazing. (i hate myself for having just done that - lol!).
anyway, keep writing, you're great at this stuff!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2009 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow, this is fun to read! in general, i love the idea and the reasoning you have for writing this particular story. PLUS, this is SO WELL WRITTEN! i love all the description and details (basically the same thing) along with how amazing smooth and realistic this is. sometimes as i'm reading a story here i might think that the description or dialog was unrealistic, so as a way to applaud and encourage the really great writers i try to write a quick review.
aka, amazing job, and i'm heading to the next chapter right after i eat dinner!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate the specific feedback.
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2009 09:28 am Title: Chapter 2
This was simply wonderful. Just what I needed this morning. Thank you so much for writing!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2009 06:50 am Title: Chapter 2
REALLY nice! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And thanks sooo much for introducing me to this site :)
Date: September 17, 2009 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. You captured their dynamic beautifully. Way to go!
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2009 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Its 1/3 more hug for your money.”
“Money? Didn’t realize I was paying you for those.”
“Well, Pam, hugs that good don’t come free.”
That was so cuteeeeeeeeee omg :)
Loved the insecure Pam, very realistic :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2009 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was great, love rule 11, brilliant idea and something that's not been done before. Awesome!!!
Date: September 17, 2009 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1
This was wonderful, I enjoyed it so much. You walked the wire between their doubts and their humor perfectly, and the ending was spot on. I must mention that I really, really loved this line: Jim laughed, that rich, contented laugh that I never heard until after we got together.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I changed that line a couple of times, actually, so it is good to hear that the final result passes muster. :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2009 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice work! A great balance between the humor and the fears behind this couple. Given their 'history', I really do think a conversation like this would be necessary and it would never be overly emotional so you captured exactly how I thought it should be. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I think its challenging to try to strike a balance between expressing deep emotion and humor. Glad you were satisfied with my attempt.
7 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2009 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was lovely. So sweet and so romantic. And the boot on Dwight's car was priceless!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: September 16, 2009 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very cute. Best part was the fake boot on Dwight's car & “And yet, somehow you doubt that you are the woman of my dreams." Perfect ending!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked my prank. And the ending, because I always struggle with endings.
Date: September 16, 2009 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really good. I always wanted to hear some conversation about doubt and you nailed it perfectly.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.