10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2009 12:07 am Title: October 20th
Sorry, I had to do the review again, when I saw this story being updated and read this story, it made me squee. It was so cute! I love when they're going through the baby names, and them teasing each other. It will be sad to see this story to end soon, it's one of my favorite stories to read. I can't wait for the final chapter, I know it'll be great like the rest of the chapters!! =)
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2009 11:56 pm Title: October 20th
holy crap, i love the last line! i'm going to be so sad to see this end!
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2009 06:10 pm Title: October 10th
I loved this chapter, I thought it was very sweet but it had little moments there and there. At least had a some love between them at the end. I can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2009 04:46 pm Title: October 18th and 19th
that was great! i love the whole idea of this chapter, and how jim and pam need to explain themselves. great job with the writing - i'm sure i would have confused every single person reading this halfway through!
can't wait for the next one!
9 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2009 10:24 am Title: October 18th and 19th
Lovefool, I have to echo the other reviewers and ask if there's a way you can extend their honeymoon for...like...two more months ;o)
I'm loving how you're giving us so many different things about our favorite couple. The shower scene? Phew! That was unbelievably hot. Jim trying to ease Pam's pain? So sweet and just so them. And then this latest? Angry Jim is...wow....just....wow...I'm dead. I also loved that it turned Pam on because I've always figured that she likes that side of her husband :D
Looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for this.
Date: October 19, 2009 10:20 am Title: October 18th and 19th
You did it again girl... God, the last paragraph killed me... I feel all warm inside now! Keep this going forever! I also really think that's how Jim's anger works, he keeps it bottled-up... Awesome portrayal of him! Can't waiting for more!
9 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2009 06:46 am Title: October 18th and 19th
*sigh* Those Honeymooning Halperts. They kill me. You're right--not boring. Is it wrong that I find Brawling!Jim hot? Great that they were able to talk through this encounter. The sweetness of the ending gives us back Boring!Jim, and he's OK in my book any day :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2009 06:02 am Title: October 18th and 19th
So I haven’t really been on here much lately, and last night I came on to post my fic and was up until nearly 2:30 in the morning catching up! I love this fic. So much. I mean, honestly since I first started reading your stories years ago, I always felt that I loved your Jim and Pam. The way you write them – their banter, their humor, their intimate moments – you are so good at it and it’s just as I imagine they would be. It’s amazing how you’ve tapped into that and stayed consistently true to your vision of them. It’s because of this that I always just love your stories. I loved them in the bar – how they flirt and it manages to be funny and sexy all at once. And? The leg cramp thing? Perfect – after having three kids let me tell you – you described that feeling so perfectly. I remember waking up with those damn things and feeling the exact same way each time. And finally, I love angry Jim, and how protective he is. Sexy, married, father, Jim is hot, and when he put his hand on her stomach like that…guh. Just perfection. So anyway, in short: I love your writing, I love this story and please, please write every single day. Lol. Thank you!! J
Date: October 19, 2009 05:52 am Title: October 18th and 19th
This is seriously the most sweet & romantic story. So real and in character. Every chapter shows their connection and how much they love each other. From the hot scene in the shower to emotionally opening up to each other about being scared to Jim's protectiveness -- you show the many sides of their relationship. Every chapter shows how they really are "more than that"! I love it!
Date: October 19, 2009 05:43 am Title: October 18th and 19th
And then he did.
Awesome. Nicely done as always, LF
Date: October 19, 2009 04:34 am Title: October 10th
Another great chapter! You are SO good at this - you just seem to really get them in your writing - I can just see this thing happening to them (I really wish we could see your chapters played out in the show) Angry Jim is very hot... Would love for you to continue this story, even after the honeymoon - WOW...
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2009 01:30 am Title: October 18th and 19th
Okay, so first things first. I don’t know why, but I find it INCREDIBLY hot that he beat someone up for touching Pam. I literally had to open the windows and fan myself, because wowza!!!!
I also liked how it was so unlike Jim to do something like that, but put him in that situation, and put Pam in that position, and then he does what he needs to do and defends his wifey.
This is really well written and I love the attention to detail you have included. Is this the *sobs* end?
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2009 11:39 pm Title: October 18th and 19th
I just realised I haven't been leaving reviews for this which I am terribly sorry about LoveFool because I've been refreshing the Most Recent page every 20 mins to see if you've updated - that's how much I look forward to your stuff. Seriously. So longish review coming up -
I thought I'd let you know I've love the sweetness and the heart that you convey so well in each chapter as well as the humour and simplicity. I spent the whole of this one going "Oh no, what happened?!" and as it got to the part with the college guys, I literally groaned and went "No Jim don't do it!" Jim's lucky he's so cute and adorable because I think I would have been a little less forgiving then Pam. But it is kind of funny how Jim does it and I still love him but when Roy did the same thing.... protective!Jim is waaaaay hotter than posessive!Roy ;)
Despite the leg cramps and visits to security, I still want a honeymoon like theirs! Do you plan on covering the credit card saga? (P.S I don't mind what you cover - you could have them reading the phone book to each other and I'm sure I would love it).
Date: October 18, 2009 10:06 pm Title: October 10th
lol. i actually like the idea of them staying in niagara better, if you go on a destination wedding it makes sense to honeymoon there too, right?
as always this story is such a pleasure to read. sure, they aren't doing much and pam's pregnant, but sometimes it's nice just to spend some time with people who you truly love. and you do such a wonderful job of writing this! great job, and i can't wait to read the next chapter. too bad they can't honeymoon forever, i don't want the fic to end!
Date: October 18, 2009 09:38 pm Title: October 17th
I think this is my favorite chapter so far. I loved every bit of this. :)
Author's Response: This was definitely one of my favorites to write. I'm glad you liked reading it as much as I liked writing it! Thanks so much for the feedback!
Date: October 18, 2009 08:56 pm Title: October 14th
I love this story! Please don't let them ever come back from their honeymoon! :)
Date: October 18, 2009 06:05 pm Title: October 17th
I felt so incredibly connected to Jim and Pam during this chapter. LoveFool you're doing a ridiculously good job at putting this together, and I just can't wait to read more and more.
Author's Response: That makes me smile. Thank you so much JHalpert. I appreciate it.
9 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2009 12:40 pm Title: October 17th
As always, sweet, touching, funny.
Author's Response: Right back at ya NanReg! ;-) Thanks so much, girl.
Date: October 18, 2009 12:36 pm Title: October 17th
I love these! The dialogue is so good. Characterizations are spot on, too. I really like the quiet, low key way you have Jim taking care of Pam in this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks Vampiric Blood...I felt like the next time they found themselves in a situation like this, it would be much less low-key...doctors and nurses and the like around. I wanted us to get a chance to see something like this...without seeing it. ;-) Thanks so much for the great feedback.
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2009 09:33 pm Title: October 10th
Another great chapter! I'm so glad you fun stuff to read at the end of the day!
Date: October 17, 2009 09:04 pm Title: October 17th
What a lovely and fun follow up to the wedding! You always manage to capture their voices very well. Thank you so much for sharing this little gem. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much WalkinLove. I'm so glad you're enjoying this!
Date: October 17, 2009 08:29 pm Title: October 17th
loved this chapter =]
extra cute.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
9 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2009 08:23 pm Title: October 17th
"Well Pam if you play your cards right this baby will associate you with me too."
Such a cute line. You write their playful banter so well, so believable and so them. This story is so full of happy married love.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks kaystar! I love that...happy married love. ::sigh::
Date: October 17, 2009 07:58 pm Title: October 17th
I read it twice because it was awesome! Yep... I'm weird! Jim taking care of Pam is just great! Sigh... Can't wait till next week's episode... I missed Jam this week!
Author's Response: LOL. I have read many a fic, more than once so I don't think you're weird but I will take it as a big compliment. I only read things I really like more than once. Thanks so much!
Date: October 17, 2009 04:15 pm Title: October 17th
Yup, those tall Halpert boys are a little scary in that regard. And yo just know that seeing Pam in pain is going to tear Jim to shreds, but he will do everything possible to make it all better. How soon until Baby Day? *sigh*
Nicely done, lovefool.
Author's Response: Ms. Hoo I can not WAIT for Baby Day. Seriously...I could barely contain myself for the wedding. I'm not sure how I will handle baby day. Thanks so much for being such an awesome reader and reviewer!