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Reviewer: Boysenberry Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2016 02:14 am Title: October 12th

The tone was just right here. It came across in their exact voices.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2010 12:35 am Title: October 10th

re-reading this, because it makes me happy. and the thought of jim getting a sleeping pam out of her wedding dress just makes me swoon. such a sweet man!

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2009 07:34 pm Title: October 17th

don't worry pam... my sister was 9 1/2 pounds at birth, and my mom had her with no drugs.

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2009 09:55 pm Title: October 21st

Awww! That last part got me all teary eyed. I was going to comment after Chapter 7 and say that was my favorite chapter of the series, but this one is great. Each time I think "this is the best one." "No, this is." You just keep outdoing yourself! Sad this is finished, but you have something else up your sleeve, yes? I seem to recall something about a fic ideas folder... What a smashing concept :)

Reviewer: MilkandSugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2009 03:55 am Title: October 21st

I can't believe *sob* that this *sob* is over already *sob*...was it *sob* something I said? I can change, I promise!

No seriously, this whole series and this last chapter has been THE cutest and sweetest story...EVER. And that was before reading Pam feel the baby move. I'm writing this before I read it again for the millionth time because this time I really will melt from...just...gah...
*adds to favorites before becoming a big pile of sappy goo*

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 08:24 pm Title: October 21st

Guh.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 08:21 pm Title: October 20th

Argh, I've been out of town and these are positively delicious to come back to. This did me completely in - I'm a puddle.
"With her sketch book laid out on her lap, she drew the lines of hands she'd drawn probably about 100 times; sometimes just from memory, sometimes like now...by actually seeing them in front of her. Her goal was to do a series of his hands and someday when they were both old and gray she could look at his hands throughout the years."

Reviewer: ilovetoJAM Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 05:47 pm Title: October 21st

=] cute.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 05:19 pm Title: October 21st

that was so beautiful. i don't want to spoil the perfect flutter of feelings going through my head by writing a long review (i'm greedy - i want the happiness to myself!). amazing story - you've done this so well. great idea for writing this as a beginning! can't wait to read the latest work of yours. if you ever need a beta let me know!

Reviewer: Katie J Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 05:01 pm Title: October 21st

This entire story was amazing Lovefool, and this ending is perfect, captures them looking forward to their life together. :)

Reviewer: Ninjam Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 04:37 pm Title: October 21st

You say "boring", I say "perfect". Tomato, to-mah-to ;-) Thanks, LoveFool. I really enjoyed this!

Reviewer: emhunter24 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 12:02 pm Title: October 10th

So wonderful! I wish they had like a 3 month honeymoon so you could keep writing. Loved the reference to the rainy proposal and the misty wedding.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 07:49 am Title: October 21st

Damn straight, LF.  The 'happy ending' is just the beginning.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 07:44 am Title: October 10th

Pardon me if I'm repeating myself, but this story was AWESOME!! Absolutely wonderful! I loved all of it!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 07:30 am Title: October 21st

Glorious. 

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 06:18 am Title: October 21st

:) beautiful!! i got goose bumps at the end, really, really great job with this. You did an amazing job.

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 06:15 am Title: October 20th

"It's because I'm not a ham like you"- made me smile :) My Mom used to call me this all the time as a kid. I loved it!

Reviewer: adampascalfan12 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 12:15 am Title: October 21st

I really love the ending to the story, I can't believe this story ended so soon, it makes me sad!! Plus, I can't wait to read more of your stories, you're one of the great writers on here!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2009 11:27 pm Title: October 21st

Wonderful end to a wonderful story. I'm sad it's over boooooooo hisssssss!

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2009 10:29 pm Title: October 21st

eep i love it! especially the ending... so sweet.

i'm very sad to see this end. i didn't even mind getting woken up at 12:30 AM by my blackberry letting me know that this had been updated. and i have to work at 6 tomorrow. totally worth it.

Reviewer: simplicity Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2009 05:28 pm Title: October 10th

I love this story! I don't want their honeymoon to end! *(I wanted to be your 100th reviewer!)*

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2009 04:48 pm Title: October 20th

that was absolutely adorable. great chapter - well written as always. ill be so sad when you post the last chapter - this has been one of my favorite stories to read and review. fantastic job!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2009 10:29 am Title: October 20th

No, make them be on their honeymoon forever :( You have the power to do this COME ONNNN!!!

Loved this so much, I'm sick and still love the whole banged up Jim thing, mmmm :) and super cute his wedding ring woke him up aw :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2009 06:10 am Title: October 20th

That was so wonderfully loooooong, LoveFool ; )  "Sweet little cocoon" is such a perfect description. I am going to miss this fic so much.  It really makes me happy--fisticuffs and all : )

Reviewer: MilkandSugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2009 03:48 am Title: October 20th

Thanks LF - I was having a bit of a rough day but cheered up instantly just seing you'd updated. :)

ITA with Jim. Team Girl all the way. There were several bits that made me laugh out loud like Jim's suggestion of 'Agent Michael Scarn' and the last line. But my favourite has to be this:

Pam spoke through her teeth. "Get back down there right now!"

"Yep..."


Tee hee...I love this pair. :D

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