10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2009 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so cute, and the Daddy has a shotgun made me smile :)
8 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2009 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was sweet! I had forgotten about Michael telling Meemaw that Pam and Jim were going to name the baby after her. Great call back to that, as well as to Pam's Mother and Michael....
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2009 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was great. nice job with all the other characters (besides jim and pam, i mean) - they were very well done! i love the whole idea of playful banter because that's what so much of their relationship is based off of. nice work!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2009 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
As soon as I read that first line I settled in for a funny story,and you did not disappoint! Much as I love sappy Jim and Pam it wouldn't be right for them to have a reception without a lot of weirdness. I liked gettting to see some more of Penny too. She seemed liek a great sister and it's good to know Pam has one relation besides Jim who's slightly normal:)
Date: October 14, 2009 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1
awww...I like this. Poor Pam, having to deal with the thought of her Mom and MICHAEL at the reception. Sure glad she's got someone to lean on...and do other things with. ;-) Lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2009 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww...that was sweet. I like that you brought up the part about the baby being named after MeeMaw. Very cute. :)
Date: October 14, 2009 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
I bet Pam couldn't wait to get out of there at the end of the night! Sweet story, downtown.
Date: October 14, 2009 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet and sexy, downtown. Nice interactions between Pam and other characters, Penny in particular.
One teeny, tiny little typo: "leaded" should be "led." I debated pointing it out but thought you would want to know.
Loved how you ended this, too :)