Date: February 24, 2010 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 21
yeii more babytimes!!! bring them all!!
they'll be great to get through this week until march 4th..
..im actually felling like read them all, all over again.
10 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2010 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 21
When I need a dash of happy, these always pick me up, yan. I wonder if he still does take moments to remember? Maybe
Date: February 24, 2010 10:11 am Title: Chapter 21
this almost inner monologue was BEAUTIFUL. I loved it! More soon please!
10 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2010 07:05 am Title: Chapter 21
Yanana, this was so beautifully emotional. I felt "full" just reading it. How perfect to have them revist the roof. "Sometimes," he started instead, "I just need a minute. Because... I remember. Everything." His voice was low in his throat. Oh, that is just lovely and so Jim. I can envision this scene.
Date: February 24, 2010 05:24 am Title: Chapter 21
I love the idea of Jim taking private moments to appreciate what has happened - how lucky they are. Sweet.
Date: February 08, 2010 08:35 am Title: Chapter 20
Another great one, yan (can I call you yan? Cause I seem to do that a lot.) Once 'Anna' is born on the show, I'm going to miss these updates :(
Date: February 08, 2010 12:25 am Title: Chapter 20
I have a young cousin called Anna and it's really weird, but if you squint a little, she could very easily be Anna Halpert. So I think the name is perfect. I think this whole story is perfect. I'm getting scared now that you won't be writing it anymore (please tell me I'm wrong. Please!) so I went back and re-read the whole thing. It was a very enjoyable hour for me, I assure you :)
So just in conclusion - I want no more talk of wrapping this up. Not until you've written a chapter for every single day of her pregnancy. From conception to delivery.
Totally kidding!
But not really...
Date: February 07, 2010 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 20
Awww...I love Anna. I think that's a perfect name for their baby. Just simple and sweet enough. Good luck with your basass baby, Pam. lol
Date: February 07, 2010 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 20
Haha, my favorite line:
"Anna what?"
"Halpert, I hope."
I want to see more Jim and Pam talking about the baby on the show, damn it!
And Anna is a great name.
Date: February 07, 2010 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 20
dear yanana,
best. chapter. ever.
i don't know why i loved this so much - maybe because it was PERFECT! Jim and Pam are written exactly the way they should be and you fit so much adorable into something so simple it makes me crazy!
and i SHOULD be doing homework :)
favorite!
10 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2010 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 20
Very cuteeeeee :) I will miss this *sobs*
Date: February 07, 2010 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 20
LOVED this..and I know a Marley..she's a beeeeyatch
10 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2010 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 20
Hey now, hey now, I loooove the name Morgan! :) But Duncan...not so much. What if she was fat and she was named Duncan? That would not pave the way for esteem-boosting nicknames. (donut)
I really should've reviewed sooner, but I mean 20 is a good checkpoint, don't you think? Anyway, I adore this story. Perfect writing, perfect characterization, la la la it's amazing and makes me think of dusty sunlight in windows and oak trees and strawberry smoothies. And babies, obviously. And that's all good. This is all good, all good, I love it :)
Date: February 07, 2010 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 20
Yanana, you're such good company...and a bad influence. I'm supposed to be focusing on a class I'm taking and you keep giving me these lovely distractions.
She turned her head to look at him, her nose closer to his cheek. He kept his eyes on the picture, the black and white beginning version of them. She studied his eyes, his hair falling into them, the stubble appearing on his chin. That's my favorite. You're so good at these little snapshots.
Date: February 04, 2010 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 19
Two chapters back-to-back? Awesome! You lady are not making waiting for the birth episode any easier! Did you hear the March 4th episode will be an hour long?!?!? How exciting is that! Once again great job... Any more updates?
10 [Report This]Date: February 02, 2010 07:30 am Title: Chapter 19
Yanana, I feel like a broken record. I think I need a yanana "auto-reply:" Yanana, I love this chapter. It is wonderful and so are you." How about that?! Am I on to something? Seriously, this was such fun. I could feel the happiness bubbling underneath the surface, and it made me happy. What a wonderful secret to keep :)
Date: February 01, 2010 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 19
This was lovely.. a different type but really lovely :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2010 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
Okay, this has got to be my favorite chapter. I just really liked the idea of it, and the incorporation of Dwight...
Everything was just really well done, so nice job, my favorite chapter here by far!
Date: February 01, 2010 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 19
Loved THIS SO MUCH. I love Pam winding Dwight up, and the whole talk of the baby when no one else knows was just too freaking adorable for words. I love this story so much *sigh*
Date: February 01, 2010 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 18
Like all your work, this was SO beautifully written. I can't tell you how much I'm smiing right now :D
Date: February 01, 2010 11:20 am Title: Chapter 18
I can really see this scene playing out in my head and I loved how you let them be so slow and cautious and sideways about the subject. Well done.
Author's Response: As always, I love hearing from you in response to one of mine, since your stuff is so great. Thanks for taking the time. =)
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2010 11:02 am Title: Chapter 18
aheeee! Perfect! I'm squealing..this is just..perfect.
Author's Response: thanks. =)
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2010 07:46 am Title: Chapter 18
Yanana, this was just delicious--romantic like all your work. It's what I love about your fic. Her eyes opened at some point during the night, the time unimportant. Anonymous and ink blue sky. She saw his face, the design of it in the dark. She smiled and imagined another one, similar and maybe nearly identical, between them, one day. Truly gorgeous. The idea of them wrapped up in each other and discussing future babies, unknowingly creating one is simply perfect.
Author's Response: Your last sentence -- that is why we need more conception fic. I took it a step further, and yeah, it's probably too ironic, but eh. I'm so glad every time you stop and review, Nan. Thanks again. =)
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2010 12:46 am Title: Chapter 18
definitely one of the best chapters
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2010 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1
i can totally understand this... sure, you can see the test result from the test at the hospital, but it's just words on a piece of paper. it's completely different to see those two lines with your own eyes.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you could see this. =)