10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 04:00 pm Title: I Don't Like Jelly
This was good! The script format was a little hard to read, but I was ok once I got used to it. There were a lot of funny lines, and I love that you focused on the whole cast (hey, Meredith got two lines!), instead of going Jam...but you are a guy, so I kind of expected you not too.
Checked out your site, and watched the beginning of the video. I have a crap computer, so I couldn't stand to watch for long (the constant buffering!), but I admire your dedication to your art. I love your "Jim"!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 10:52 am Title: I Don't Like Jelly
I really, really enjoyed it. I would definitely love too see more fics like this one. It was funny and I could easily imagine it happening on the actual show.
9 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 07:53 am Title: I Don't Like Jelly
Very good--just like the flavor of last season, I think. I love the line about "One man's jelly donut..."
Date: October 13, 2006 02:04 pm Title: I Don't Like Jelly
Ditto. Fix the formatting and I'll read/review it. I've been writing spec scripts for years.
Date: October 13, 2006 01:53 pm Title: I Don't Like Jelly
Hey--I couldn't read this because the formatting was killing my eyes. But I would like to! Please fix, and I'll leave a real review. :-)