10 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2010 08:17 am Title: Come Upstairs
AwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesome. Oh, and Awesome.
ETA: Really well written, LoveFool.
Date: March 10, 2010 04:16 am Title: Come Upstairs
Holy shit, woman, this is incredible! And it is now my favorite "Jim and Pam do the deed" story ever. Perfection. Pam in the throes of hormonal overload, Jim giving over to the moment and thanking his lucky stars. Hot and sweet and sexy. Just perfect. Thank you.
10 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2010 01:02 am Title: Come Upstairs
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Date: March 09, 2010 09:16 pm Title: You Could Do This With Your Eyes Closed
I seem to be back to my reading, but not reviewing :( I have read all three so far and loved them, LF. I get a few minutes here and there to read, but no time to review until waaaaay later and it's hard to remember which I have and have not reviewed, but I do love when you write! I'm glad you have another series, which also read as stand-alones. Even though I didn't review the other that much, I will miss Miss. Jill E. Bean, though. lol
Date: March 09, 2010 07:58 pm Title: Prologue
Another amazing story...seriously, LoveFool? Are you just filled with incredibly stories? You have such a perfect interpretation of them which is probably why I love your stories so much, this is SO cute.
Author's Response: Wow, you're so nice to say that. Not even sure how to respond to such a sweet, sweet review. THANKS, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.
9 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2010 08:50 am Title: You Could Do This With Your Eyes Closed
On my way out of the kitchen I had this random thought that when you did finally wake up, it'd be real romantic if we ate the spaghetti like Lady and the Tramp. So I'd piled all those long noodles into one of those huge pasta bowls that we have and I brought up some extra parm just in case. I sat the bowl on your side of the bed and tried not to eat it without you. Because you were busy making a baby and that wouldn't be fair. How cute is that? I mean, really?!
Date: March 07, 2010 09:19 pm Title: You Could Do This With Your Eyes Closed
I can hear Jim say every single word in this. Heck, I can even see the look on his face while he's saying it. Nice inclusion of the details from The Delivery as well. Another wonderful job. *sigh*
Date: March 07, 2010 08:03 pm Title: You Could Do This With Your Eyes Closed
You need to stop with this. This is too great. Some of the lines your Jim says?
"I mean - think about that. Think about that."
"I'd wondered what part of he or she you were busy making then."
Ugh. I'm so glad you updated this so fast. I can't wait for the next one. This is just too great.
10 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2010 07:35 pm Title: Prologue
Love this! I loved reading your stories and I can't wait to read more of this story! =)
Author's Response: Why thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: March 07, 2010 07:20 pm Title: You Could Do This With Your Eyes Closed
Cuteee :)
Date: March 07, 2010 01:10 pm Title: Night Sickness
Wow, I love it so far! more please!
Author's Response: Thanks Floppyhair - love the screen name by the way. :-)
Date: March 07, 2010 12:48 pm Title: Night Sickness
Excellent idea for a story, LoveFool. Your Jim is perfectly in character--sweet, nervous, an excellent caretaker. Looking forward to these glimpses into his mind.
Author's Response: aw, Nan thanks so much as always. You're such a loyal reader and responder. THANK YOU!
Date: March 07, 2010 12:43 pm Title: Prologue
Guh. I'm going to love this. No question.
10 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2010 11:01 am Title: Night Sickness
This is fantastic! I am just loving the Jim takes care of Pam aspect, and the point of view really works for this story. (Wow. I just sounded like a stupid celebrity... can we pretend that didn't happen??? Thank you!). I just really like this story, and I can't wait for the rest!
Author's Response: hahaha, I didn't think you sounded like a stupid celebrity, but thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2010 08:47 am Title: Night Sickness
Adorable! But, then again, I love everything you write :). Please continue, this story is just lovely!
Author's Response: Oh that's so sweet of you! Thanks so much!
Date: March 07, 2010 08:15 am Title: Prologue
Yes, very happy to have another insight into this couple. Great start.
Author's Response: Thanks KH! Glad you enjoyed the start! :-)
10 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2010 07:44 am Title: Night Sickness
Awww, okay, I LOVE this! I'm a complete sap for Jim-taking-care-of-Pam moments and this was just great. Love that he treated her like she had the flu, because that's a natural instinct, and having a baby is not. And the insurance. haha.
Author's Response: Thanks Sarah! I'm so glad you liked it! I too am a sucker for Jim taking care of Pam.
Date: March 07, 2010 05:59 am Title: Prologue
*lets out a big whoop* I was so sad when Baby Talk was over. This makes it better. I love this - I'm a sucker for introspective Jim, so I know I'm going to love this so much. For starters:
"When you tried pushing my hand away, I said "No, you need this," and then you let me keep my hand there.
I convinced myself it was because I used my stern voice. If you were going to be walking around carrying my baby I needed to start using the voice my dad used to. It sounded ridiculous on me."
...is awesome. They were just kids, weren't they. Thanks for starting this. Please continue.
Author's Response: Aw Jazzfan I think we were separated at writer's birth. lol. You always manage to pick out MY favorite parts. Thanks girlfriend.
Date: March 07, 2010 12:21 am Title: Night Sickness
Wonderful. I'm so excited for another WIP from you. Your picture of Jim and Pam makes you one of my favorite authors on this site. You have a great handle on them. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks Yanana! So glad that my take on Jim and Pam rings true for you! Cheers to a new era of fic now that there's a "real" baby, huh?!
Date: March 07, 2010 12:18 am Title: Prologue
Okay, are you serious right now? I can already tell I'm going to love this. Moving on...