Date: March 09, 2010 07:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Mel, I'm glad I caught this. I really appreciate your writing style. This story is riveting. I hope you can update again soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm about to launch into writing the third chapter as soon as I finish typing this. :) I'm glad you're liking it so far!
Date: March 08, 2010 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was AMAZING. I love me some season 2/3 angst. Was beautifully written, and I really hope you continue this and make it in to a series :)
Author's Response: I'm gonna try to make it into a series! We'll see how it goes, I've got it planned up a little. Thank you so, so much for reviewing. :D
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2010 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really great! I always wanted Jim to run after her when he caught her staring at him - so this made my day - and I can picture this conversation happening exactly like this. Of course, that would mean we wouldn't have the rest of Season 3, but that's ok too. You're really capturing their essence here. Keep going please!!!
Author's Response: RIGHT?! That's the whole reason I started this fic, I saw the episode on TV recently and just had to write up how I would've loved to see it go. Don't get me wrong, I love how season 3 ends, but Jim's comment of "if I thought Pam might be interested..." just left me aching. ;) Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: March 08, 2010 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Spectacular. This is just spectacular. Honestly, there were parts reading this where I felt my breath catch in my throat. I absolutely adore everything about how you've set this up - especially the tense moments before Pam starts to apologize -- you have made both Jim and Pam very believable and very realistic while also keeping us on our toes. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you very, very much. I'm so glad I'm doing this right. I love the angst, and it's so delicious and easy to work with in season 3, but I don't wanna overplay it, you know? So knowing I get those tense moments right is awesome. Thank you so much for reviewing! :D
Date: March 08, 2010 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good Lord, don't stop now!
Author's Response: Okay! Haha, I've got more to come, I've got it planned out for at least a couple more chapters ... we'll see how it goes! Thanks for reviewing! :D
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2010 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goody goody two shoes, missy - keep typing. Loved this, and that's all I've git to say to you!
Author's Response: Haha, well thank you! I will keep typing as long as the ideas keep flowing! And, of course, if I'm doing it right. ;)
Date: March 08, 2010 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love some season three angst! Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! And who doesn't love season 3 angst? It's so painfully good. ;)