1 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2020 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Well. This is adorable. And a great callback - this would definitely occur to Jim in that moment.
Author's Response: Thank you! That swaying thing was so instinctive when my babies were babies. This was the kind of thing that would just drop into my head, fully formed. No plot and very little characterization, just a tiny moment in time.
8 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2010 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww. So very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, kaystar!
Date: March 18, 2010 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just love the visual of Jim in the dark using his ears to guide him. So vivid. (Which is ironic, considering he's not actually seeing his way down the hall...)
Author's Response: Thank you for your random and spontaneous review. HA! (Seriously, thank you, as always, for your help. You make me better at this. I appreciate it).
Date: March 18, 2010 03:15 am Title: Chapter 1
That was just...perfect!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! There wasn't much to it, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2010 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
*happy sigh* this is just lovely. i can totally see pam doing the "mommy sway"
Author's Response:
Thank you. Despite her misgivings, I think Pam is going to be just fine as a mommy- and the "sway" just comes instinctively, doesn't it? Thanks, again!
Date: March 17, 2010 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such a fluff punch packed in a few words. I love anything that comes from you, though. Great job!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, yanana. That's so nice of you! I'm glad you liked this one- I kind of like it, myself. :)
Date: March 17, 2010 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing how much you can say in so few words. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you. It's funny- in real life, I'm a total chatterbox. You'd never know it from my postings here, though! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it!
Date: March 17, 2010 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very pretty. Full of meaning in such a small amount of writing - sometimes that's really all you need to get your message across.
Author's Response: Thank you, Mel! My fic tends to be on the short side; I'm glad you still found something meaningful here.
Date: March 17, 2010 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww...what a wonderful way to come full circle :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It really is nice to think about how far they (we!) have come, isn't it? :) You're always nice to me, NanReg- I appreciate it!