1 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2021 10:13 am Title: crash into me.
Um. Double ouch?
1 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2021 10:11 am Title: buy me a rose.
Um. Ow?
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2010 10:09 pm Title: sing.
I really hope you'll update this soon! I love it and have been watching for an update. :-D
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2010 06:34 pm Title: sing.
Love love love thisssssss so much.
Author's Response: YAY! Thank you! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2010 06:28 pm Title: crash into me.
I can't tell you how much I am enjoying this story. Love the flashbacks, it works so well.
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2010 08:11 am Title: crash into me.
For some reason my first review of this chapter didn't show up completely. Hmmph! Anyways ultimately what I was trying to say is the last part, where he's imagining what it would be like to have dinner at home with Pam is perfect, and I could see that happening to him in both Scranton and Stamford. Good stuff!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That means a lot! :-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2010 08:09 am Title: sing.
Lots happening in this chapter, I really love having Pam's perspective. Getting a glimpse of how she and Roy were and what they had in common, and how she feels more for Jim than she did for Roy, but questions it... That's really spot on characterization for me. Can't wait to read more of these!
Author's Response: I've always felt really connected to Pam, so I'm glad that characterization worked out! Thank you! :D
Date: July 13, 2010 10:42 pm Title: buy me a rose.
this is a really unique story. looking forward to see what happens next!
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2010 09:09 pm Title: sing.
It does make you wonder. She needs to wonder on over to his house and watch a movie or something. Be close, ya know? More, more, more, please?
Author's Response: Thank you, Andastainonmyshirt! Your reviews are so kind. :)
Date: July 13, 2010 02:20 pm Title: sing.
Yay! Another update, please bring us some post Roy attentiveness!
Author's Response: haha well, attentiveness isn't really Roy's strong point. Poor guy. He tries. ;) ;) Thanks for reviewing, mah dear. :)
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2010 07:18 am Title: crash into me.
Please, please continue with this story! It always worries me when an author says they don't know where they're going with a story, since they might not finish. I'm enjoying this very much :)
It's a little thing, but my favorite parts are the tag lines and how the problem at the end of the chapter flow with what was written. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. It's just a very random story haha :)
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2010 06:46 am Title: buy me a rose.
Funny and sweet in one chapter- ahh, like the old days of the Office.
Jim trying to take the focus off Pam, knowing Dwight is a suck up and will do anything for Michael.
I'm sure Pam's heart went pitter-patter when she saw the flower :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I like writing those days. I'm still a season 2 gal at heart. :)
Date: July 13, 2010 06:25 am Title: crash into me.
This is beautiful, keep it coming :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2010 11:16 pm Title: crash into me.
I'm really interested to see where this is going. I felt like I was there with Jim in some of these scenes.
Author's Response: Thanks!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2010 08:56 pm Title: crash into me.
This is so good, oneleaf! I reread the last chapter and the rose still makes me swoon. (Too bad JKras is married now. Darn.) Anyways, this is just lovely and heart wrenching at the same time. Keep going!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. IKR? *sigh*
10 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2010 06:33 pm Title: buy me a rose.
""Pam, we don't have to tell each other everything, okay?" he'd say, disgusted at the topic."
Definitely sounds like something Roy would have said. Great job with the S2 angst.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate that.
Date: April 01, 2010 02:05 pm Title: buy me a rose.
"Yoga," Michael explained, "is Buddha for peace."... "Buddha is all of our countries."
Oh, how very Michael!
Author's Response: LOL Yay! I'm glad someone else thought that was funny.
Date: March 31, 2010 05:27 am Title: buy me a rose.
love it :D
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: March 31, 2010 12:10 am Title: buy me a rose.
aww i really enjoy reading this...although i kept thinking this was the jim/pam/pregnant era util i read roy (ups).
anyway..looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's going to be a mixture, so there will be some of that. I thought about mentioning it up front, but I guess I like to be mysterious. :P
9 [Report This]Date: March 30, 2010 06:38 pm Title: buy me a rose.
oh my goodness, that was sweet. i can see where some frustration (on pam's side) came into play, yet jim's offering is just perfect. i want a rose from jim!!! keep going, i want to see more lovely jim! (sorry, am i focused a little too much on this single element of your story? i don't mean to be, jim is just so sweet!)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I want a rose from Jim too :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 30, 2010 03:11 pm Title: buy me a rose.
That was SO amazing. I love how you wrote this, the way poor Jim is strugling to watch Pam be with Roy through stuff like that - how he'd be different etc.
Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 30, 2010 12:53 pm Title: buy me a rose.
Aww! I love season 2 angst, and this has just the perfect amount! Can't wait for the other snippets!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 30, 2010 12:49 pm Title: buy me a rose.
LOL at the Buddha being being a country! I nearly spit out my drink. And aw, Jim is just the sweetest.
Author's Response: LOL I'm glad you liked that! I was hoping people would. Thank you! :)