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Reviewer: Ninjam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2010 07:43 am Title: They Take the Cake

Yummy, smutty goodness! No better breakfast reading than that! *mwah*

Reviewer: pigeon Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2010 04:39 pm Title: They Take the Cake

Ah, fictional naked men doing dirty things...this is the core of why I love you!

I especially liked the image of Pam wearing the crumpled bow on her head.  It's sexy and cute at the same time.  And I've never heard it referred to as SWAP before - live and learn. :)

Reviewer: yanana Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2010 10:01 pm Title: They Take the Cake

Ooh, I learned a new word today. Don't imagine using "SWAP" anytime soon. But still. Thanks for making me blush for a few minutes here!

Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2010 11:22 pm Title: They Take the Cake

i felt so dirty reading this..and i love it! xD..i love this king of sexy, simple stories. imagination at its highest ohh yeah =O
and by tthe way jim sounds like a realli good lover ::ashame::

Reviewer: AtTheStars455 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2010 01:33 pm Title: They Take the Cake

Wow, that was sizzling hot! Never heard of SWAP before, but I'd look forward to reading more in the future!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm happy that you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2010 01:16 pm Title: They Take the Cake

Yep. Ms. hands speaks the truth! Her story was ready before May 1st!

So, here I was doing my little beta run through (HARDLY any comments ... and NONE that recommended any changes to the smut factor ... because, really, who does that better than JAMhands?) when in walks Mr. Blood.

Mr. Blood: What are you doing?
VB: Oh, just a beta run-through.
Mr. Blood: What is it?
VB: Pure smut. (Having not been initiated to the new term, SWAP.)
Mr. Blood: ?
VB: Wanna see?
Mr. Blood: Leans forward to read. Blushes. Shakes head and leaves without a word.
VB: :-)

Author's Response: Woooot! I made Mr. Blood blush! I hope you made that up to him for me. ;)

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2010 11:07 am Title: They Take the Cake

Wow! Just. wow.

Author's Response: Thanks! Just thanks!

Reviewer: bkwrm Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 10:33 pm Title: They Take the Cake

Oh...em...gee...

I didn't know there was a word for the kind of stories I love but apparently there is: SWAP. I love smutty stories and even better is smutty stories by you, JAMhands! One reason is while there's the hotness factor, I feel that your Jim and Pam are still in characters.

I think Pam pretty much broke Jim's brain (among other...things) with her present for his birthday and I'm sure Jim wouldn't want it any other way ;o)

Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you, Bkwrm! I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 07:43 pm Title: They Take the Cake

Wow.  So naughty.  Although, the one line I loved and stood out in this was Dwight's "A clean colon is a happy colon".  LOL!



Author's Response: Well the only thing that makes me happier than a clean colon is a good Dwight remark. ;) Thank you!

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 05:58 pm Title: They Take the Cake

Oh...oh so naughty...but oh so nice!

Author's Response: Thank you, Mr. Bill!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 05:18 pm Title: They Take the Cake

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!  You know I love me some smutcake, the best kind of birthday cake!  And I even learned something, "SWAP,"  which I will try to incorporate in conversation whenever possible :D   Sincerely, Margaret, I am so very touched that, despite what you're going through, you would take time to post this delicious fic for me.  Thank you so much.  I appreciate it more than you'll know.  xo 

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you liked it! Thank YOU for all of your encouragement and support. I was so flattered with VB asked me to participate. I hope you had the happiest of birthdays! *hugs*

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 04:30 pm Title: They Take the Cake

I have MISSED your stories soooo much (not just the smutty ones, but noy have I missed those.)

This was delightful and delicious. Who needs a storyline when you have such well written smut?

That was AMAZING! and I heart you for writing this.

*saves to favourites*

Author's Response: Thanks so much, darling! *hugs*

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