Date: May 09, 2010 09:17 am Title: Sunshine
Have to chime in with my love for this line especially: "We'll have to convince her that people are making a documentary about her"...
Very realistic scenario.
Date: May 06, 2010 10:03 pm Title: Sunshine
So happy to see something new from you. Enjoyed this one from beginning to end.
Date: May 05, 2010 06:12 am Title: Sunshine
I'm not a big fan of the super fluffy, baby, parent fics, but this was flawless. Having your name attached makes it so much better! True mom right here: “No,” she says. “I’ve passed through the Happy phase, and I’ve entered Paranoia. Why isn’t she awake?”
Date: May 04, 2010 10:28 pm Title: Sunshine
Gosh I love it when you write. "We'll have to convince her that people are making a documentary about her"...perfect. This is just the ride blend of light-hearted and realistic.
Date: May 03, 2010 07:20 pm Title: Sunshine
You finely captured the joy and paranoia about a child that sleeps in. Sweet, horrible freedom! This was a pleasure to read :)
Date: May 03, 2010 11:25 am Title: Sunshine
Aw! This is so cute. I love how excited they are that she slept so long. I can't really relate to it, but it definitely seems like a big thing for a baby to do. I hope to read more stories from you soon!
Date: May 03, 2010 07:43 am Title: Sunshine
Annabel! How amazing of you to make an appearance at my surprise party! If you know even a little about my history as an Annabel Winslow fan, I'm sure you figured out that you could re-write the phonebook and I would love it, because you would make it that much better :D Seriously, this was so yummy. It takes me back to the early days of my own beetle and that first night sleeping through. Seems like yesterday, but it's so not. I love the banter between these two. So funny and sweet. Her body surprises her sometimes. It’s still slack in places, but it’s nearly hers again: the shape and contours she remembers. And when they do this, when he touches her this way, any leftover self-consciousness evaporates. She is just Pam. So, so good. Thank you again for this lovely birthday gift. It means so much. xo
Date: May 03, 2010 03:02 am Title: Sunshine
Oh...the "documentary" line...somehow slyly clever....I laughed out loud. Very nice!
Date: May 02, 2010 10:52 pm Title: Sunshine
Awwww....this is simply lovely and funny at the same time. A little slice of life inside the Halperts' home complete with some sexytime.
Thanks for sharing!
Date: May 02, 2010 08:18 pm Title: Sunshine
“Such awesome sleeping!” says Jim.
I just loved that line - totally a Jim thing to say. Very cute and I loved how the reader was able to experience every aspect of Jim and Pam's new life. Great job, Annabel Winslow!
Date: May 02, 2010 07:17 pm Title: Sunshine
“We convince her that people are making a documentary about her,” says Jim. “Or… we could stop worrying and be opportunists.” < like the Truman show?
That was soooo cute. I loved it!!!