Date: May 23, 2010 12:54 pm Title: Roy
Another great chapter, I thought your Roy was very much in character, and I love the bath comment at the end, nice call back :) I liked how you made me feel some sympathy toward Roy, like he's not all that bad. Maybe I've been reading too many fics where he was that bad. But I like how you humanized him a bit more. I hope that made sense. Oh... when I read your any other suggestions, the immediate thought I had was Katy, if you so choose.
Date: May 23, 2010 12:04 pm Title: Roy
Wow, Roy was spot on! I loved how it ended happily for him. I'd love to see another....but I can't really think of who else to do!
10 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2010 05:29 pm Title: Karen
I'd love to see another loose end tied up, no pressure though:) Not to parrot the other reviews, btu I'm glad you used Karens point of view and showed that she's really a great person.
Glad you decided to post this!
Date: May 19, 2010 10:14 am Title: Karen
I really like this. Great details with both sides, and you made a good decision to go from Karen's POV and not Pam or Jim's. Wonderful.
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2010 06:07 pm Title: Karen
God that was incredible. I should get to math homework but I needed to say that! Such a great one shot and I love the colliding worlds and bantering. Add a second chap if you can think of another one, it would be so cool! Maybe they meet up later when their kids are 5 or 6 and Karen/Dan are taking Ethan to see Karen's past. Jim and Pam are just walking outside of the building after another take your daughter to work day and they run into each other. Then they start talking about Oscar's welcome back party and how Karen asked Jim if he was still in love with Pam...
That could be interesting. Sorry you just inspired me to start thinking about other possibilities. Slightly in the future talking about a harder issue, huh? Try it if you like or just forget about it - your choice!
Date: May 17, 2010 08:49 pm Title: Karen
i really like the way your wrote this as if karen was telling a story...its good prespective. i enjoy reading fic' were things with karen are good, and not just the bad one of the story. i really like karen(not as much as jam but i do)
Date: May 16, 2010 06:28 pm Title: Karen
Very nice! I like how it's not necessarily EASY but that all three are able to be kind to each other.
Everyone's voting for a Roy loose end. I'd go for that but ... for a BIGGER challenge ... I'd propose Michael and Holly or Michael and Jan! If you could pull one of THOSE off realistically, I would be MOST IMPRESSED!!
Date: May 16, 2010 11:08 am Title: Karen
I love stories like these, and I love that you painted Karen in such a nice light. She was never really a bad person, she just wasn't right for Jim. Great job!
Date: May 16, 2010 09:44 am Title: Karen
Good job, Dedeen! Nicely descriptive--I love the little details, particularly with Cece. On board for tying up the Roy loose end if you're up for it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2010 01:25 am Title: Karen
like Hannah_Halpert, i also wanted to see them meet up post-baby. i loved the image of jim & karen drinking from juice boxes and sharing goldfish. mmmmm... goldfish.
i also think that there should be another "loose end"... this time roy.
Date: May 15, 2010 09:54 pm Title: Karen
Ohhhh another loose end? *intrigued*
This was adorable. I have always wanted to see Jim and Karen meet up post babies, so go you :)
Brilliant :)