Date: July 26, 2010 06:31 am Title: A little less conversation, a little more action
Ouch. Poor Jim. Can't be the best for one's self-confidence, eh? I suspect Pam's discovering that our boy isn't as tremendously endowed as he joked he was :D Or maybe that's not it at all. Maybe I'll just have to wait for the next chapter. Which I hope is soon. 'Cause I'm greedy.
Great job in this chap of detailing how they may behave at this stage of their lives, ivy. I'm glad they're on level ground and Jim's not a man whore :) I'm also glad that his penis is finally being put to better use ;)
Author's Response: Damn, was Jim giving off that man whore vibe before? I guess that's what happens when you've got a huge cock. Sorry, that was crass. :-P I'll do my best to make sure Jim's penis pleases you, dear. I'm sure it thanks you for all your encouragement, and so do I.
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2010 05:42 am Title: A little less conversation, a little more action
The whole time I was reading this, I kept looking at the scroll bar to see how much was left of the page - I was so desperate for it to never end! So there we go: the worst part of the chapter was the fact it had to end.
I'm loving the pace, the banter, the nervousness...yes, the smut. I'm loving the smut a LOT. And I think Jim acted like a perfect gentleman the entire chapter. For the most part anyhow. Pam acted like any normal girl. That's what made the whole thing sweet and real. Love it. :D
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2010 12:08 pm Title: Don't break the seal
Oh wow. My favorite chapter so far! I just can't get enough of college!Jam and drunk!Jim. Haha. The whole line about peeing like a marching band made me laugh out loud. Keep up the amazing work on this story; it's great!
Date: July 24, 2010 09:19 pm Title: Don't break the seal
Oh my giddy aunt, I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet! I've been following along avidly all this time and I'm firmly in love with the college version of Dunder-Mifflin. Especially college Jim (duh)! The only bad thing about this is that I feel like a bad college student because I haven't done anything like this the whole time I've lived on campus. That really must change (strange that even the idea of doing a body shot off Dwight has encouraged rather than discouraged me from playing drinking games...interesting...). I can't wait to see what's in store during and after the walk home.
Oh and I've met PLENTY of drunk college students (unfortunately). And Jim is completely and totally in character. Those guys will pee wherever and whenever... not their best quality...
Author's Response: I should probably say, because I am now years past college and therefore do need to remember my adult responsibilities, that whenever I played Three Man in college, anyone who chose to play with non-alcoholic beverages did so without question from anyone else. But yes, I do recommend engaging some trusted friends in the game. There's a camaraderie and a playfulness at that age that gets harder to find the older you get. I'm quite nostalgic for it.
I'm so glad you've been enjoying the story. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and I'll look forward to hearing from you more.
Date: July 24, 2010 08:43 pm Title: Don't break the seal
Nooo what an evil way to finish this chapter, I was getting so in to this lol. Love love love tbis. I cant tell you that enough
Author's Response: Oh, but it's so fun to be evil! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: July 24, 2010 08:33 pm Title: Revenge is a dish best served half-naked
Awwww Michael wants to be Jim's bff.
Already favoured this series!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2010 08:16 pm Title: Lick it. Slam it. Suck it.
LMAO Jim's dare to Pam. You write them so perfectly. I can see everything you write happening!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2010 08:05 pm Title: What's a little epitaxis among friends?
Guh love the Jim and Pam tension, and the kiss between Pam and Karen LMAO - I can so imagine Kevin's reaction, This is so great, I love everything abouy it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2010 07:51 pm Title: For I have sinned
I love love love where this is going. See all these characters we know and love acting as we know them now, but in college - great idea!!!!
Date: July 24, 2010 07:29 pm Title: Don't break the seal
*sigh* Why do these chaps go so quickly? I was so excited to see an update and now it's done :'( Btw, the peeing outside seemed totally in character. Oh and yet another chapter featuring, directly or indirectly, Jim's penis :D
Author's Response: God bless you, Nan, I can always count on you for reviews that make me both smile and laugh out loud. I'll try to come up with other, less... utilitarian... ways to incorporate Jim's penis into the story. Because I know you love it. ;-)
Date: July 24, 2010 09:46 am Title: Don't break the seal
This chapter was really endearing and funny, even though 80% of it was about Jim going to the bathroom. You're clearly a very talented writer.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Yep, many of the late night walks I had back to campus from my friends' house involved at least one such incident. And the way that you can go from an asanine moment to a romantic one in a split second is definitely something I remember from back in the day.
10 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2010 10:19 pm Title: Don't break the seal
That. Banter. Was. Awesome.
And the line about streaming soundly into shrubbery made me laugh aloud.
My favorite chapter so far also.
I have to say, though, I never questioned that Drunk Jim would pee in front of Pam. I remember the fun Drunk boys in college.
Author's Response: Oh yeah. My boys (as in my male friends, whom we ladies referred to as "our boys") didn't even have to be drunk. On the plus side, I walked into my friend's dorm room once, bitching about someone stealing a parking space and the response from my four guy friends who were there was "want us to go pee on his car?"
Thanks so much for writing. I'm glad you liked the chapter. The banter was a lot of fun to create; I hope we get lots of Jim/Pam banter in the upcoming season.
Date: July 23, 2010 03:40 pm Title: Don't break the seal
Yep! My favorite chapter so far! Adorable! More please! This was really funny. The part where she says you only use one hand and he says it's not that unruly is officially my favorite line in fan fiction history. :)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Though apparently not unruly Jim has particular talent. One of my men friends just told me about an unpleasant experience today in which he was nearly, uh, "baptized" by a fellow gent in a public washroom.
10 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2010 02:27 pm Title: Revenge is a dish best served half-naked
I loved the Oscar and Michael thing, the Jim would kiss Kevin thing and Michael commenting on Karen's butt lol But I honestly have to say I can not wait to see what happens when Jim walks with Pam back to the dorm! ;-) Hope the next update is soon!
Date: July 22, 2010 01:25 pm Title: Revenge is a dish best served half-naked
Man, I'm so in love with this story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much!
Date: July 22, 2010 07:44 am Title: Revenge is a dish best served half-naked
Such fun, ivy! I so enjoy each update. You've done an amazing job at keeping these characters true in this setting. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan. I appreciate the feedback so much. I love how the characters are created so well by the show's writers and each given their little nuances that they can be transferred into different scenarios and still feel real.
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2010 08:21 pm Title: Revenge is a dish best served half-naked
Aww, good times, good times. This is so much fun, and unlike a real drinking game, doesn't cause hangovers. Can't wait for the walk home.
Author's Response: We could make a drinking game out of it. You know, take a shot every time Jim and Pam share a moment. Drink when Kelly says something with an exclamation point. Or when Angela registers disapproval. Or Michael says something inappropriate. We'd all be quite hungover.
Date: July 19, 2010 11:42 pm Title: Lick it. Slam it. Suck it.
my respects to pam!! ;)
and revenge woo hoo!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2010 08:20 pm Title: Lick it. Slam it. Suck it.
When Kelly picked her three for closet time, I offered up a 'poor Jim' out loud.
Oh my goodness, AWESOME chapter Ivy. The 'verbal copulating' and how at first our two were accused of undressing each other with eyes, but then James {love the use of full first names also!} takes it up a notch when he challenges Pamela and gets her to remove her shirt... Applause to you!
I hope Pam's revenge continues to turn the heat up on this sizzling game even more!
Author's Response: I feel like Kelly would love being stuck in a closet with three men, don't you?
10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2010 11:20 am Title: Lick it. Slam it. Suck it.
I know this is a Pam & Jim story, and I'm loving the slow burning build up between them, the subtle descriptions are wonderful. I love how enamored he is with her, that glimpse into his mind is great. And I'm really really looking forward to see what happens with Kelly, Ryan, Dwight and Jim. Awkward! Love it all. But this is just pure Dwight and Jim:
“Ridiculous, engagement rings,” Dwight scoffed. “The Amish give practical gifts to propose, like a clock or a stock pot.”
Jim stored that information for future use. = Wonderful.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I did have to look up Amish engagement traditions to find out that information. I hope you won't be disappointed though, I really don't have plans to extend the story too far into the future. But I don't think you'll be upset by the end. At least, I hope not.
10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2010 02:27 am Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
I've read a few stories on here where Jim's penis was 9 inches, but this is the first one where it has been 14. I'm not sure if that makes Pam lucky or unlucky.
Author's Response: I think I wrote one of those stories. Which are the others?
(I once promised a friend if I ever wrote his biography, I'd say he had a 14 inch penis. That was his only request.)
Date: July 18, 2010 09:46 pm Title: Lick it. Slam it. Suck it.
Two words: Very excited! can't wait for more....Pam's revenge should be good...
Author's Response: Oh, it will be.
9 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2010 08:23 pm Title: Lick it. Slam it. Suck it.
Since I have "commitment issues" with WIP, so I wanted to wait until this is finished to start reading it. Add to that, it's AU set in college, which I'm not usually a fan of, so I thought it would be easy to NOT read this.
Well, crap. I did start reading it and I LOVE it! In my head, I don't picture college aged kids in my head; I picture them as they appear in the Office. Strange, but it works in my head and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Please post soon, 'K?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for giving it a chance. I'll do my best to keep the characters recognizable. And I know a lot of people have issues with WIP, but hearing from readers is so motivational to keep going; I really appreciate it.
Date: July 18, 2010 06:19 pm Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
i need more of this story! so good!
Date: July 18, 2010 05:31 pm Title: Lick it. Slam it. Suck it.
Glad I checked back over here before logging off for the night, ivy. These chaps go way too fast. You're killin' me with all this talk of Jim's penis! Give the people (person?) what they want!:D
Author's Response: Not to worry, Nan, it will be revealed.
All! All will be revealed.
Did I say it? Freudian slip.