Date: August 27, 2010 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was sweet :) Are you planning to continue this? I hope so!
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2010 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Firstly, welcome. Secondly, this was really great. I love me some season 2/3 angsty romance. I really enjoyed how you had Pam challenging her own thoughts... should she go see him, should she turn around etc. Really really good, and very in character.
Like Ivy said, this works as a standalone, but I'd love to see you continue this. See how they interact with each other once they're inside.
Brilliant and I really hope we see a lot more from you :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2010 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, that was so good! I was so happy that you decided to have Jim be glad to see her - as so many stories where Pam goes to see Jim feature Karen upstairs, or the two of them getting drunk. What a sweet ending, and please continue this. You know what? I think you've inspired me to go back and continue my story that I started a while ago set right after Casino Night - I finally have an idea of what to do! Thanks for this bit of inspiration! You'll just have to see what happens... :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2010 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, it's lovely! I love how she started to turn around on the highway and at his door, but went through with it. The ending was so sweet. Kudos!
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2010 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
please don't stop now!! this is great. just what i wished pam had done during season 3 before jim came back to scranton. i like that you've chosen to give her time to get herself together before starting with jim. can't wait for more!
Date: August 22, 2010 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I especially liked the detail that Jim reached for her hands. It's a nice bookend to his gradually letting them go in Gay Witch Hunt. Welcome and nice start! Looking forward to hearing more from you.
9 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2010 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Love it!
Please continue. After watching The Initiation a week or so ago I was hoping for a post phone call fic where Pam takes the lead.
Thank you SilverSun.
Date: August 22, 2010 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet! I think this could stand as a one-shot, because you have wrapped it up nicely, but it could also continue on.
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2010 08:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Really like this! Hope you continue. I agree with the review below. Nice to see him happy to see her! I'd be happy to help if you need a beta. But you seem to be doing just fine on your own. :) welcome to mtt! Hope you post more soon.
Date: August 22, 2010 08:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes, pls continue. It's good to read one where he is glad to see her and not embarrassed cause he has someone upstairs! You're not too rusty!