10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well that's just cruel!
And by "cruel" I mean--so very, very good, please pretty please please continue quickly :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, how stupid and silly she is, and how wonderful YOU are for writing this. It's tense and awkward and funny and has a wonderful ending...because he could have just as easily written "I can't" and that would work within this universe but would have killed me. (Although the author's note gave me courage!). Awesome as usual!
Date: October 18, 2006 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Today she had spent the morning looking for more signs of chinks in his armor."
What a lovely turn of phrase! Looking forward to more!
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was terrific. Loved that you had them passing notes via old-fashioned paper instead of email - so much more tactile and somehow poignant. Can we get the follow-up? Membership in Steamy Fic Club may demand it! (BTW, I've never gone to the supply closet in a fic...maybe I've been remiss in my duties.)
Author's Response: Working on Chapter 2 as we speak. Hope to get it up before I leave at 5.
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh yeah.... supply closet, baby!!! Bring it!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
AH! This is so good. Love the tension between them. Can't wait for more:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
That is the cruelest stopping point I have ever seen! Write, write, write!
(Oh, and I loved it:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW do I like where this is going! I love angst and tension with the promise of resolution...great job so far! Can't wait to read part 2!
5 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
AND??????
You can't leave us hanging like this!!!