Date: October 15, 2010 09:19 am Title: August 2012, Part One
Cool idea, keep it going!
Author's Response: Thank you, we surely shall! Let us know what you think of the next chapter once it's all posted.
Date: October 15, 2010 08:56 am Title: August 2012, Part One
Hey Ladies! I was thinking of writing something in this sense, like Jim and Pam being recognized with Cece, of course, after the release of the show and them having to hide it, kind of, as not to give in their story. I'm soooo excited that you are writing this, you have no idea! Keep'um comin'!
Author's Response: Thanks! So excited that you're liking this so far! We're having a lot of fun with the second chapter and our outline for the rest of the story. Definitely stay tuned, as we delve into what (we think) happens when that documentary they've been filming finally airs. Looking forward to your thoughts on the next chapter! We're in the process of getting it together, so stay tuned.
Date: October 15, 2010 05:58 am Title: August 2012, Part One
I'm confused...why do Jim and Pam seem disinterested in each other? I feel like it's a bit out of character for them, unless of course there's something up your sleeve we don't know about.
I'm interested to see where this is going...it's a very different take on normal Office stories.
Author's Response: It's not that they're disinterested. They're full time parents with full time jobs and sometimes things like this happen. We're trying to keep them in character and we're sorry you felt that the characters were off in this first chapter. Do not fear. They still are very much in love and very committed to one another. Stay tuned, thanks for the feedback and do let us know what you think of the next chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2010 12:39 am Title: August 2012, Part One
Oooooooooooh very very good stt, I'm really excited to see where you girls take this. I love that Jim and Pam are so in love, yet they're normal human beings and it's okay to fight and bicker about small mundane things. Pam definitely needs to make it up to Jim though ;)
Cece was adorable, I could picture the little monkey trying to stand up in the cart, happy to see her mommy and daddy.
Fab fab fab. Cannot wait for the next part now :)
Author's Response: Thanks Sally! (thanks for the rec, too, much appreciated.) That's what we're going for, that they're normal people living their lives like any married couple, they bicker, but they're still very much in love with one another. Don't want to give too much away so please stay tuned, we're really excited about writing this and glad you're enjoying it so far! Let us know what you think of the next chapter. It should be out soon, we're in the process of getting it together. Thank you!
Date: October 14, 2010 04:47 pm Title: August 2012, Part One
Well this is an intriguing beginning. I'm looking forward to what happens next.
I like that you have Jim and Pam being a normal married couple, having their little moments of disagreement. There's the stability that it's okay if they get on each other's nerves a tad. I really appreciate stories where they are portrayed as real and this seems like it will be one of those. Excited to see what comes next.
Author's Response: Thanks, we're glad that the concept of them being a normal married couple has come through here, that they're just doing their thing together, and we're really happy that this seems real so far. We will continue to make sure that we keep things at that level and bring you a story that you'll be entertained by. Glad you're along with us on our journey, we're really excited about writing this, and have already begun to piece together the next chapter. Stay tuned, and please do let us know what you think of the next chapter.
Date: October 14, 2010 03:45 pm Title: August 2012, Part One
Ah!! I love the concept! As the series has progressed, I've always wondered what life would be like for all of them when/if the documentary aired. What life would be like, what network it would air on, how their lives would change, and stuff.. so I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this.
I like the way you've set up Jim and Pam now that they're past the "honeymoon stage." I'm anxious to see how viewing the documentary affects their relationship.
Other than Jim and Pam, I loved Dwight's comments about being a "tv star." And, of course, Cece is adorable.
Excited about this one. Nice job :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! We're really excited about writing this one together, and have already begun to piece together the second chapter. You're absolutely right, this is well past that honeymoon phase, where they're just living their lives and doing their routine. Don't want to spoil anything for you, so stay tuned and we hope to hear from you again throughout our journey! Thanks for the feedback!