10 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2011 04:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Re reading your old fics makes me happy :D
Date: October 20, 2010 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this line:." I inhaled her baby scent – a mix of milk and talcum powder and whatever it was that made my baby my baby" It rang true. Babies do have their own unique scent.
Author's Response: Thanks Jazzfan! I don't actually have babies, so I wouldn't know unique baby smells, but it seemed right in my head haha - glad it made sense! :)
Date: October 19, 2010 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love that Cece is in Jim's old room and that Pam was sleeping on his side of the bed. The details here are wonderful. This is a lovely picture of the family.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review andtheivy! I always sleep on my hubby's side of the bed when he's MIA - so much more comforting :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2010 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so adorable. Great job with the descriptions of family life. Perfect father/daughter conversations and excellent Jim/Pam banter. So good. :)
Author's Response: Jim/Pam banter is something I struggle writing, so that's one of the best reviews I could ever get haha - thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it so much!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2010 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahh! Wow. I love this! So sweet and so perfectly them. The descriptions of everything are beautifully written, and it flows so nicely. I also really like your little history of the Halpert house/yard-- from Jim's dad to young Jim and now for Cece. And Pam's art project? Eee! Adorable (especially after Jim stepped in to help)
Absolutely loved this!! :) Thank you for sharing
Author's Response: So glad you liked it, more_awake! I appreciate the review :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2010 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was adorable!! Loved the family moments from when Cecelia was a week old and now in October. I love the idea of having her hands and footprints, it's such a nice piece that they could remember by.
Author's Response: Thanks adampascalfan :) I always figured Pam would have her daughter fingerpainting by 2 days old, so it kinda worked out in the story haha
Date: October 19, 2010 10:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, this is so sweet and lovely!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Deedldee! You're too sweet!
Date: October 19, 2010 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Nicely bound story. No loose ends. Must be the fluff sticking everything together. Every delightful detail just seems to fit snugly into its proper place just like the Halpert family unit. I LOVED IT!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Author's Response: You're welcome, you're welcome, you're welcome, Vitamin-D! And thanks for the sweet review - I appreciate all the kind words :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2010 08:56 am Title: Chapter 1
*sigh* So cozy! Such a sweet reward for Jim to have everything he's dreamed of under one roof--the roof under which he grew up. The handprints were a lovely detail, as was every other little detail having to do with that sweet baby. Adorable ending conversation :) Three cheers for fluffity fluff!
Author's Response: Thanks NanReg :) Your reviews always make me feel like bursting with pride. You're too sweet!
Date: October 19, 2010 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1
It was frigid this morning in Boston..what an absolutely wonderful story to wake up to with my coffee. Thanks for this! i read it twice!
Author's Response: GASP! Another Bostonian? Squee! Hello! Thank you for reviewing :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2010 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
This was suppppppppper cute. I loved it. I love seeing Jim as a Daddy. Everything about this was wonderful. Keep 'em coming, yo!
Love Jim talking to her about boyfriends lol.
Author's Response: Thanks Hannah :) The boyfriend line came from my friend who just had a baby girl - her husband's first words after she was born were "omg, she's perfect" followed by "and she's never dating". Sounded like a "Jim" thing to say haha