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Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2009 02:18 pm Title: To Do

Fantastic! Whoa!
More please! :)

Reviewer: pigeon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2008 08:13 pm Title: To Do

Yay for supply closet smut fic!

Reviewer: GoIrish Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2008 03:18 pm Title: To Do

Totally hot!

Author's Response: Hee! Wow this was an oldie.  So glad you liked it. 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2007 08:48 pm Title: To Do

How did I forget to review this earlier?  John the prop guy needs to get that supply closet built and pronto!  And if Karen goes near it, I will drag her out by her hair!

Author's Response: lisahoo - you're adorable.  And yeah.  Just think of all the action that little space could get. :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 07:56 am Title: To Do

This was so fun to read! I'm liking Adventurous!Pam very much...and I'm sure Jim is too!

Author's Response:

Hee hee.  I think you're right!   Thanks Luna!  It was so fun to write. :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 08:35 pm Title: To Do

I love passionate Pam and her checklist!! 

Author's Response: She's pretty great - isn't she?  Thanks kaystar!!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 11:22 am Title: To Do

I must be high on supply closet smut because I thought I reviewed this. Where to start? Okay, you've added "smut maven" to your resume alongside "fluff goddess". This is just chock full of Jammy goodness - and you did the hot without losing the sweet. Delicious!

Author's Response:

You are not alone.  There's alot of that going around.

Thanks!!  My mom would be sooo proud!  LOL!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 09:46 am Title: To Do

Whoa! Hot, funny, and very, very in-character. You know I'm a fan.



Author's Response: heehee!  And you know I'm honored.  ;)  Thanks Lis!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 07:07 am Title: To Do

Love the paper clip trail!

There was something unbelievably sexy about having her way with him while he still had a tie on.

PREACH ON, SISTER!

Man, I have to run errands now, and I'm going to be at the FedEx office looking for the fucking supply closet!

Great read first thing in the morning though. Especially nice voices on these two. Thanks! ;)



Author's Response:

I mean...gah....the image....it's just....

Can't speak. Complete incoherence.

I'm glad you liked it.  I figure I'm going to have to write some smut for NaNo - I might as well practice now.

Hope you had fun at FedEx. ;)

Reviewer: Leely Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 06:45 am Title: To Do

“Pam, seriously.  I get that you have this little checklist and normally?  I’m an advocate.  I mean, truly.  Not even a question – I’m a charter member of the fan-club.  But I can’t think of anyone I’d like to have a chance to walk in on me in that…situation…less than Michael.”

Your Jim-voice is nothing short of remarkable.

Oh, and the rest of the story?  Very hot.

As I said in my review of bitterpill's fic, long live Supply Closet Day!



Author's Response:

That is quite simply the best compliment you can give me.  It thrills me to know you think I've got the voices down.

It is official.  October 18 is hereby declared "Supply Closet Smut Fic Day"

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 06:20 am Title: To Do

I like adventurous Pam.  Great job.

Author's Response: Meeeeeeeeee too!  Thanks gotkona!

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 05:55 am Title: To Do

Ohhh you have been holding out on us missy! You are very good with the smut and the closets and yes. Hee, loved this! Also, I think the best part is that it's in character. I love Feisty!Pam. I think that's when she's at her best. Hopefully we'll see more of her this season!

Author's Response: Feisty!Pam is so much fun to write and I thank you for the vote of confidence. :)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 04:53 am Title: To Do

Okay, it is official: You should write smut more often, because my god, this is incredible!  The pacing, their voices - everything.  This is just so wonderfully in character and so incredibly hot.  WOW.  Seriously - hats off to you!

Author's Response:

Hee!  Thanks girl7.  I can't seem to accomplish the straight on smut - I've got to find some humor in it.  I'm so glad to know it worked.

I'll see what I can do. :)

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 03:57 am Title: To Do

First, may I say that I don't know whether to be incredibly flattered - or guilty for being such a bad influence - for having anything to do with your conversion. I think I'll take the former - so THANKS so much for the dedication...truly an honor! Who knew chocolate pudding and La Liz could be such a powerful force for evil? I like it!

Now for the story - LOVE IT! You officially can never again say you can't write steam - too late for that now, Missy! So many great parts/lines here - love when he enters the closet and she says, 'oh hi Jim...did you need something?' or when she says 'I'm so glad we got that over with.' I could hear her voice exactly.

So Bravo. This was hot as a very hot thing as we say in the biz. And welcome to the dark side! Now, about that Conference Room....



Author's Response:

Please be flattered.  And influence you did - though you are not necessarily a bad one per se.  ;)

Hot as a very hot thing?  Well good golly.  I guess I've offically arrived. :)

Conference Room....Break Room...Stairwell...Dwight's desk...

Oh the possibilities.  LOL!

Reviewer: travelingviolet Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 12:36 am Title: To Do

Aaaah. This was FANTASTIC! Their voices are so true and I can totally see Jim and Pam having various mishaps while in the thick of things, as it were. 

I loved this: "A particularly risky encounter in her parent’s attic almost resulted in Jim falling through the insulation..."

Just wonderful, xoxoxo!



Author's Response:

Hee!  PoorJim.  Or depending how you look at it - LuckyJim.  The girl seems to be insatiable.

And let's face it.  Who can blame her?  LOL!

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 11:17 pm Title: To Do

"image of Jim, in the supply closet, covered head to toe with only yellow sticky notes"

And that's the image I'm going to bed with tonight. Seriously? My two favorite things. Jim and post-it notes.

You're killing me.

Love scandalous Pam. Love flustered Jim. Love, love, love the supply closet (my favorite fanfiction character).

Stupendous job as usual.



Author's Response:

The 3M company does not know what a marketing opportunity they have waiting for them. :)

Thanks shan!  Glad I can combine your two "loves".  Ummm wait.  That sounds...kinda...dirty.  LOL!  And yes.  The supply closet does seem to have become an entity unto itself hasn't it?

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 10:24 pm Title: To Do

Very, very nice. Fairly incoherent right now.

And ElizabethLynn, check out the very first couple of seconds of "Grief Counseling" — you'll note that the show has magically gained a supply closet from which Michael is obtaining the boxes for his "going to the warehouse" bit. It's to the left of the shelves behind Stanley's desk.

Author's Response:

Incoherence is my goal.  I'll consider it mission accomplished. ;)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 10:08 pm Title: To Do

perfect - it's a shame that will never make the series (or even the extra scenes!!) ;-)


Author's Response:

Yeah.  Until it's on HBO we're all SOL.

And until I see them in the same city again I'm going to make it my mission to put them in as many small spaces together as possible.   ;) LOL!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 10:00 pm Title: To Do

Oh, was this a treat.  Funny and hot .  Steaming hot.  Wonderful job:)

Author's Response:

Ditto my dear.  Loved your version of this scenario too.  I'm glad you liked it. 

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 09:54 pm Title: To Do

Ha!  You've done good, my dear, for your first foray into smutland.  Very funny, and who knew Pam was so organized even when it came to sex? LOL  I was almost expecting her to have an Excel spreadsheet for it. ;)

Author's Response:

You never, ever know.  Hee!  Thanks Gen!

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 09:52 pm Title: To Do

Awesome! And perfect ending. Thinking of places in the office for them to "christen" makes me giggle. The best place is Dwight's desk, I think. The ultimate prank, even if only Pam and Jim knew. Oh! Or maybe Angela's. So, so wrong.

This was wonderful, as usual for you.



Author's Response: I was thinking Dwight's desk myself.  Could be a whole new genre.  LOL!  Thank you!  This was fun.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 09:45 pm Title: To Do

Funny AND sexy!

Dammit, when are they going to add a supply closet for reals on the show?  *pouts* 



Author's Response: Shan thinks we've actually got one.  I'm inclined to agree. As for the story - I'm so glad you liked it. :)

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