10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2011 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
So so good!
Date: February 04, 2011 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1
This is just lovely! I'm so glad you've joined the writers here. Very nice job mixing in descriptions of their gestures - I could just "see" them in the story. Can't wait to read more from you.
Author's Response: Thank you jazzfan. I'm happy to be here. I'm happy to know the descriptions came out well, I was worried that I was either doing too much describing or that it wasn't going to come out properly. Happy to know you could see it like I did. I have a bunch of ideas running through my head for other stories. Thanks for the warm welcome. :)
Date: February 01, 2011 01:58 am Title: Chapter 1
This was lovely. I love first date stories! I particularly loved this line:
"He inches forward, lets out a sigh. Before she can comprehend it, his lips graze hers, slowly, softly at first."
Author's Response: Thanks so much Monotreme! I'm so excited that you loved that line & this story! :)
Date: January 31, 2011 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this, especially the way he took that list and tore it up. So perfect. Great first fic!
Author's Response: Thanks italianfood! I'm so happy to hear that you liked this. :)
Date: January 27, 2011 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
So cute the way he's so determined to be the perfect date - opening the car door, etc. I really like the way you have the two of them cutting through all the bull and just saying what they want to say.
Oh, and can I just say that I love that you had her be the first to say "I love you."
Author's Response: Thank you andtheivy, I am really happy that! I love all of your stories and I'm so excited to hear that you liked this. I always imagined Pam being the one to say I love you first, and I always think of them as a simple couple, that they're just easy breezy and go with the flow types of characters. Hopefully I'll have some other ideas up soon.
Date: January 26, 2011 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Welcome and thank you. That was one of the best first date stories written. I love your style and hope you have many more stories to tell. This one felt exactly like I thought their first date would be.
Author's Response: Thank you khand3stooges. I'm really flattered that you thought this was one of the best first date stories. There are so many good ones on here, that really means a lot. I'm really happy to know that you thought this felt like it would have been their real first date. I was going for simplicity for characters that seem to eat out a lot, I figured they wouldn't be fancy restaurant people. And I wanted to end it in the parking lot and not back at one of their apartments because in one of the episodes - Goodbye Toby - Jim says he took things slow. =)
9 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2011 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW!
For your first effort, this is awesome. I look forward to many more from you perfect_match.
Author's Response: Thank you jinx. I'm so excited that you like this story. I'll have to think of a new one soon.
Date: January 26, 2011 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Welcome to the site, perfect_match! And what a beginning! First date fics are always nice, but yours was really great! Loved his line about the wing sauce, and the entire date sounded exactly like something they would do. Bravo! Looking forward to more fics in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you kreidy. I found the site through office tally, and have been lurking for a really long time. I'm very excited that my debut fic went over well. The wing sauce line sounded like something he would say. I'm going to have to think of something else to put on here soon. =)
10 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2011 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Welcome to MTT. You do know that now you have written such a cute fic, you may never leave us, and must continue writing fics for us, mmkay? IT'S THE LAW!!!
Seriously that was so adorable. You cannot beat a first date fic on a cold rainy day.
He leans forward; his tone whispered, his face starkly serious, noticing the fragility in her eyes. “I came back to ask you out on a real date.” < I COULD SO SEE HIM DOING THIS, AND IT WAS HOT!!
The way they wanted to just keep things simple between them, and not overthink things was just so perfectly in character to me.
Great job x
Author's Response: Thank you Hannah Halpert! I got the idea that they did not really spend too much time talking through the past when that Danny character popped up a few episodes ago. They just seemed really non challant about the whole what happened in the past thing, I felt like they may have started out that way. I'm very happy to know that you enjoyed this story. i will have to start thinking of another one soon. =)
10 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2011 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so cute and heartwarming, I defintely loved it. Great job on your first fic! I hope you get to write more! =D
Author's Response: Thank you adampascalfan12. I'm going to have to come up with another idea soon. Very excited that you liked this story. =)
Date: January 26, 2011 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Perfect_match, you say this is your first attempt at fanfic?! Wow! Great, great job! I really loved it. I have such a soft spot for first-date stories, and it seems like it's been so long since I've read a new one.Â
“Good night, beautiful.” The way he says it makes her believe it’s true. *sigh* That makes me all tingly :) Well done! Hoping this is the first of many.
Author's Response: Thank you NanReg. I am excited that you enjoyed this. I'll have to think about other ideas soon. I worked on this one for a few weeks, so hopefully a new story won't be too far away.