Date: February 27, 2011 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can say, beyond a shadow of a doubt, that I have never read anything so simultaneously adorable and disgusting. You have quite the talent, dear.
Author's Response: Thank you so much andtheivy! I just glad you still found the adorableness amongst all the...mess! Thanks for reading!
Date: February 27, 2011 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Adorable story! Great first person; like he's telling us a bedtime story! :)
Author's Response: I think you're the only one who didn't mention how gross it was! Haha! I wanted this to be like Jim was telling a story, I glad you said that! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: February 27, 2011 08:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Man reading this makes me glad my boys never found that velcro. You describe it perfectly and as gross as it is you had me laughing. Such a cute story and nice back drop.
Author's Response: Hahaha! Be glad your boys never found the straps, it is the grossest thing ever. I'm happy you liked it!
Date: February 26, 2011 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Could this be written from personal experience? You described the poopy mess perfectly. I like stories that tell more about an incident mentioned in the show. You have a nice way of writing Jim and Pam. Very easy -- they have a relaxed rhythm with each other -- you've "got it".
Author's Response: This is VERY much from personal experience. I actually didn't go much into detail because it would bee too too gross! Thanks you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: February 26, 2011 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Ha! Every parent has had one of those major poop disasters, and Jim's temptation to close the door and leave really rang true. Very cute.
Author's Response: Thank you Jazzfan! The "poop disaster" was my only way to elaborateim's Jim's line (I cleaned our daughter for like an hour..). Thanks for reading!
Date: February 25, 2011 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think everyone knows someone whose baby has done something like this, and even though the situation is completely gross, I'm glad you went there because this was hilarious(especially reading it from Jim's POV). I read it while taking the train home from work earlier, and my trying-not-to-laugh smile probably made me look like a crazy person. Oh, Cece. haha Too funny. :)
Author's Response: The situation is gigantically gross, but I'm glad you found the same humor in it that I did. And the point-of-view had to be Jim's.. first, becuase I love writing Jim and second, because I thought he would see the humor in it... I think Pam you too, but she would be a little more annoyed. But that's just my two cents!
Date: February 25, 2011 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I actually laughed out loud while reading this, Dedeen. Luckily no one's home :D Gross, yes, but so funny! What a visual! And Jim didn't get mad. Very nice.
Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed this! This is soo gross but it was the only i could explain JIm's line about him cleaning her up for like an hour! I'm glad you weren't put off by the "mess" i described here! Thanks you reading!
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2011 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
LMAO, that was brilliantly awesome. I have babysat a kid just like Cece - she was my first babysitting job, very traumatising lol.
As always, your writing was perfecto x
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! I'm also glad I'm not the only one who has been through something like this!
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2011 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was cute and also tad bit gross! But I really liked the story! =D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! It is very gross indeed!
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2011 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, and ew lol The fetal position line made me laugh out loud. Very cute! I love little snippets of the Halpert home.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Deedldee! It is very much Ewww!
Date: February 25, 2011 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Adorable...and gross! :)
Author's Response: Haha, it is VERY gross! Thanks for reading!