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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2017 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I read this all in one breath, I think. The pain was as exquisite for them as it was for us.

Beautiful.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2011 06:41 am Title: Chapter 1

...and then there is nothing but her. But there was always nothing but her, wasn’t there?

Lovely to re-read this after having watched Niagara last night :)

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2011 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

i'm so confused.... "her half drunk fingers"... she was pregnant when they got married. i sincerely doubt that she was drinking.

Author's Response: You are quite right. Not sure why I did that, slip of the brain, I suppose. Easily fixed though.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2011 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2011 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

So happy you've been feeling inspired to write, unfold :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2011 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

*speechless*

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