Date: October 25, 2017 06:23 pm Title: Season Two - Part One
Two amazing chapters. I feel Jum breathing in these. It makes me miss him so terribly! Him and the way he loved Pam. Gorgeous work!
Date: October 22, 2017 08:45 am Title: Season One
So glad to have checked back and saw that you finished this. You're so insightful. From a writer's perspective, I actually think this is a really helpful tool to get inside Jim's head :)
1 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2017 01:45 pm Title: Season Two - Part Two
This reminds me what a great job they did in season 2, showing Jim slowing and subtly getting worn down by every little thing until the transfer is the only thing that makes sense. I love the idea that he had the Christmas card on the booze cruise, I would definitely love to read a canon divergent story where he gave it to her. Great writing, even though I've seen s2 so many times you manage to include details and theories I never thought about before (like the possibility he carried the card, or that his motivations for confessing his feelings was to make Pam face her own)
1 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2017 01:21 pm Title: Season Two - Part One
So great, you capture the fun but also the underlying tension during this time. Theres all these hints that Pam likes Jim, and isn't truly happy with Roy but there's no big *thing* that let's Jim reveal his feelings or even express his concern about Roy's insensitivity.
Date: August 29, 2017 06:19 pm Title: Season One
Great story! Really, really awesome storytelling from Jim's point of view in here.
1 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2017 03:13 am Title: Season One
Still loving it, thank you for writing!!
1 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2017 08:12 am Title: Season One
Thanks for posting here, love this 1st chapter. I think you capture the Jim-Pam-Roy dynamic well, I'm sure Jim had a lot of internal struggle wanting to only think of Roy as The Worst (tm) but also having to accept that Pam did love Roy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know a lot of people think Jim is like a "self-proclaimed nice guy" who was kind of a jerk for wanting to break up Pam and Roy, so I was really trying to express the fact that it wasn't quite that simple!!
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2017 07:01 pm Title: Season Two - Part Two
I'm loving it, please finish! At least until they get together :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!! I'm on vacation at the moment but will be working on this again when I get back :) I'm posting a new chapter now to hold you over ;)