1 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2019 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 19
Daaaaaaaaaang that's all I can say. Great work
Date: January 31, 2019 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 19
Wow! Of all the things I thought might happen, having Roy do that was no where near being on my radar. It's such a change from the Roy usually seen in fic. I like the change. Roy has let her go and now just wants her to be happy. It's really a great thing to see.
The walk around the office was great.I really liked that Michael had one of his rare moments where he's actually a good man rather than the man-child he usually is.
Pam reaching out so desperately for Jim like this though? Brilliant. Not sure what else to say other than that.
Date: January 31, 2019 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
OMG ROY! You're like... You know, it all makes sense in such a beautiful way. How Roy is simply direct and blunt and sometimes a beast because of that. And how Jim would do the noble thing and be slow and just tiptoe around things waiting... But right now, I think Pam really needed that pull, and Jim wouldn't have given it to her. So, thanks Roy.
I love how much in character you've kept them all in this. Best chapter ever.
Date: January 31, 2019 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 19
You make me cry a lot with this story in general, because you're really good at evoking emotions. But this one in particular. I feel blessed that you got us to this point with 3 updates in a day too. Thanks so much.
Specifically, I like Roy actually being helpful, I like Pam being triggered by all sorts of things, and I'm a big fan of everyone in the office being actually respectful for once. Well done. Out of jellybeans for this a long time ago, but I'd give you all 5 for this chapter alone.
1 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2019 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
This is fantastic. I love the parallels with the memory.
"We do the staring thing a lot you know." Love how Jim still has that shyness like he did in S2 in this moment.
Great chapter
Date: January 31, 2019 07:21 am Title: Chapter 18
This was very cute. I love that it's his shirt that triggers some new memories. Pam's been through so much it's great to see her starting to get some happy memories back. The visit to the office I'm sure will be a can't miss it kind of thing.
Date: January 31, 2019 07:18 am Title: Chapter 18
Oh that is adorable. Thanks for letting the characters do what they wanted to, because this feels... well, like the warmth you describe Pam feeling in Jim's shirt. I'm very interested to see how the visit goes. She's gonna have to deal with Michael...
Date: January 31, 2019 05:23 am Title: Chapter 18
Yay! Keep on sending this unplanned chapters! This one is lovely, and I think manages to show how really confusing it is for Pam to start having very intimate memories with someone that is practically a stranger.
Thanks for the update!
Date: January 30, 2019 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 17
Nice chapter here. The flashback was very sweet as was their interaction in Pam's bedroom. She so much wants to remember.
Like I said in my review last chapter, there looks like there's a cable across the chasm separating her from her memories of Jim. It may be slow, but it's being added to and it looks like Pam really want's to keep building on it. Great writing as always.
Date: January 30, 2019 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh this is cute. I mean. It generally is. But this is particularly so. And I like how Pam is trying to treat Jim right even though she can't necessarily remember why.
Date: January 30, 2019 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 17
Ouch my heart. But so lovely how, in their sleep, they always manage to find one another. My favourite line? "But it’s not fair to you, either."
There you go, Pam. It's not just about you, you know?
(I also love love love that this update came this soon, thanks a lot!)
Date: January 28, 2019 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
Man, I’ve been an awful reviewer lately but I really do love this story so so much.
Pizza I can probably do though :) you come to MV before summer and I’ll get you some Gios!
Date: January 28, 2019 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
What kind of pizza?
This was really beautifully done! I love the fact that you not only describe Pam's confusion. You manage to transmit it through your words, and in one chapter you manage to show the rollercoaster that her own emotions and memories are.
And Jim. Oh gawd, I just want to hug him and tell him it's going to be ok. But Pam did it great, so there.
Thanks so, so much!
Date: January 28, 2019 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
I love this story a lot, and this chapter fits in very well. Even if you're not 100% proud of it, there's a couple really great points I noticed:
"It was the week he had started working at Dunder Mifflin." This explains so much about your Melissa plotline and also Pam's behavior that week as reported in canon, so nicely done.
And Jim's reaction to her I can't and her noticing his reaction are both very well done too. It's very touching. Looking forward to whatever you were setting up here.
Date: January 28, 2019 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
You consider this a filler chapter? Really? The depth of emotions here are far too widespread and complex to call this a filler chapter. For example, one can almost see Jim's heart about to shatter there near the end when Pam starts off that sentence with, "I can't." I mean seriously, this is a great chapter for this story.
Part of life is dealing with all the ups and downs. It may be a bit unfortunate that Pam has to re-live some of the downs, but she'll also get to re-live all the ups as well.
"I can't remember being with you Jim, but I can feel it." All this while I've been kind of picturing this kind of wide chasm separating Pam from her memories of Jim. There have been times where there have been bridging attempts. Until now though, they've come close to fixing a line across to re-build a bridge to Jim but none has really stood up. Now though, at least for me with that sentence of Pam's, there's a thin, but solid cable across that chasm. Something that will stick and stay secure. Something both Jim and Pam can build on to bring themselves back to each other.
A filler chapter? Far be it from me to put words into the mouth of an author, but personally I don't see this as such. Great job as always.
Date: January 13, 2019 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ok. So now I've finished all chapters in their proper order for reals, no cheating. The question is, what can I possibly do to make you post an update? Pretty please with sugar on top?
Date: January 13, 2019 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
About time!!
I know, I know, you were building up and toying with ppl's amotions ans whatnot but I was just screaming for this to happen. :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
Next scene: Jim being wheeled to the ER because a heart attack is threatening to do him in.
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
So, my heart hurts even more. Who can we write at which TV chain to make this happen in a movie or something? Seriously.
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow! So I came back to read it all
Haven't reviewed the other chapter because I was just too into the story. My heart aches in all the right places. Great, amazing story!
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 10:39 am Title: Chapter 15
I'm going to be honest here. I read the prologue, and it broke my heart, so I cheated and came right to this last chapter. I promise I'm going to read the other ones, now that I know that you're not planning for them to be misserable forever.
Great story! Are you planning on updating it anytime soon?
Date: January 06, 2019 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 15
Aw Dwight, ya old softy.
I love that out of all of the things Pam could start remembering, its crabs and the NBA that break through to her. It's so great.
But also, hi there mysterious nicknames and slightly flirty text messages.
I have no idea where this is going... I mean, I do as in big picture, but I have no idea what the next memories or interactions are going to be, and I'm okay with waiting to see.
Date: December 28, 2018 08:27 am Title: Chapter 15
Yay! An update! And it's a good one too! Dwight being nice to Jim like that was a nice touch. Shows that they're really the best of frenemies.
Of course the highlights are of Pam starting to recall things and feelings. I loved how Jim is Pickles in her phone. Seeing them start to reconnect like this, after everything, is very sweet. Hopefully we'll see it continue in forthcoming updates.
Date: December 27, 2018 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 15
Yay! It's back! I had to go back and re-read the last couple chapters to get my footing again, but I simply love this story. You really reach straight for the heartstrings with this one, especially with the contrasting POVs.