9 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2007 03:43 pm Title: Realization
I'm really surprised it took me this long to find a fic like this. This fandom has so much room for heartbreak and angsty drama (and not at all emotionally stable characters) that I thought it would be inevitable, but so far I think it's just you. You should be proud of yourself for creating this.
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2006 06:45 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh my gosh. That is so sad! That was an insanely powerful story. So much said in so little words. I've been wondering when someone would write something like this (Pam's words from "Halloween" spring to mind..."seriously, if you left here I would blow my brains out"), and I couldn't have asked for a more artful depiction.
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
9 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2006 05:03 pm Title: Epilogue
Jesus Christ. What a shocker. What impact. Wow. You broke my heart, witch. With a story like this, "I like" or "I don't like" is irrelevant--what counts is the power of the words and the impact, and you got those freakin' NAILED, woman. Not only should you continue with this sort of writing (although I hate the idea of Pam/Jim suicide), you should quit your day job and do more of it. If you can elicit this kind of reaction in what, a thousand words, you should be doing more of it.
Author's Response: You're much too kind. Thanks for reviewing and the very generous compliment!
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2006 07:46 pm Title: Realization
I really liked it! You have to post the second part!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 03:24 pm Title: Realization
Oh no. I think Pam will end up like Jim did in a story at FF. This is definitely not trash and I look forward to your posting the next chapter.
Date: October 27, 2006 11:25 am Title: Realization
Is Pam going to kill herself? =-(
Sad story but great start.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 07:04 am Title: Realization
Yes, you have to continue.
Date: October 26, 2006 11:03 pm Title: Realization
Very tragic deptiction of Pam's current situation. I'm eager to see more!