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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Loved this line - "And his heart was relieved, full, and in pain"  and then the "oh shit" at the end.  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

love this premise -- cannot wait to see where you take us!!

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Yay for Pam in Stamford!  Can't wait to see where you go with this.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Interesting. Can't wait to see your version of the merger.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Nice set-up. Poor Jim, first he's sick, then Pam comes back. Let the awkwardness begin!

Reviewer: Promethea Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Oh, I like it - things should turn out very differently on that other turf.  Look forward to part two.

 Only question I have is, are you going to explain why these particular people are kept on?  Seems an odd combination but perhaps there's some reason. 

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

Very nice -hope you're continuing with this!  It would be good to see Pam out of her safety zone.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

That's an interesting idea for a story.  I hope you continue it.

Reviewer: LittleKidLover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1: The Merger

haha loved it!

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