9 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet. And good advice - you really shouldn't name a baby after fruit. Pomegranite Halpert? Nope!
Author's Response: Thanks, Par! Sweet and simple was what I was aiming for after all the angst (though I do like it as much as the rest of 'em.)
And, Pomegranate! *shudder* How unfortunate!! Naming a kid after fruit seems like the kind of "cool" trend Michael would want to follow... ;)
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved this. So many people go overboard when they write Kelly, but you got her down perfectly. And Jim and Pam flipping a coin to see who does the dirty work? Priceless. And Jim smiling even when Kelly's sqeaking is so fitting and so Jim. Nice.
Author's Response: Oh, what a nice review, thanks! I loved "Jim Capsule" so much, so I'm really, really flattered to hear this from you. :)
I was trying to keep all the silly nuances we love about those characters...um, in-character, and I'm glad I was able to convey that! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2006 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Michael sounded just like Michael - I love his reference to Alice and The Brady Bunch!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I threw that in at the last minute, so I'm really glad it worked! :D
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2006 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jim and Pam together, Kelly's commentary, great dialogue...just what I needed! This was really fun and a great break from the 'reality' of the show.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Colette! That means a lot coming from you..I love your stories. :) I needed a break myself; glad you enjoyed!
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2006 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you. That was sweet and wonderful and just exactly what I felt like reading. Also, I could, like totally hear Kelly's voice in the dialogue - it's just awesome! Seriously, I never feel confident writing her, so I have real respect for those who can.
Author's Response: Like, oh my god, you're so welcome! I think I was slightly hyper when I wrote it, so that helped. Glad you liked it!