Date: March 01, 2010 06:59 am Title: Jim and Pam
oh please bring us more soon, this is all too good--and with the impending baby, this really is a good cure for those baby blues we're all having till Thursday. :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2010 12:45 am Title: Jim and Pam
YAY! I was so happy to see a new chapter of this. Sooo happy. For some reason I've been a little baby crazy at the moment, I'm not sure why...And since Baby Talk is essentially the epitome of fantastic baby!fic, I'm more than happy to read this again and again...and again...and again...
I cannot wait to read more. Almost as much as I can't want until Thursday's episode. Thank you LoveFool!
10 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2010 10:10 pm Title: Jim and Pam
Aww, so sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter and the next baby! Sorry this is so short, must get back to homework! Ahh! But great job, this was so cute!
Date: February 28, 2010 09:30 pm Title: Jim and Pam
Guh. Everytime I read a chapter of this I almost hope for a Jim and Pam girl. Almost. Lots of great lines, but I really liked the one where Jim recognizes the look on her face, but doesn't dare tell her. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: February 09, 2010 10:48 pm Title: Labor Relations
i really hope you haven't abandoned this...
10 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2009 12:22 pm Title: Mother's Day
P.S. No really, she's a pleasant girl when you shake her.
So horrible.
So funny.
Date: November 15, 2009 03:43 pm Title: The Girl Who Made You Her Own
god this one just breaks my heart... jill wanting her mommy, jim being distracted from everything, pam not sleeping until she's with her little girl.... oy.
on a happier note, i love that jill refers to herself as "bean." :o)
Date: November 15, 2009 03:39 pm Title: A Quiet Celebration
i love little 3-year-old bellies! especially when they're in bikinis. so friggin cute!
and i don't know why but jill saying "dat's good lemonade, daddy," just... guh. so cute.
Date: November 10, 2009 09:56 am Title: Child Proof
"Thank Pam, Jim...I didn't have sex with you."
*snicker*
i love how jill makes dwight melt. babies have special powers.
Date: November 10, 2009 09:54 am Title: Tickled Pink
ok, i love this so much... i'm going to review each little vignette!
1) such a funny visual of little jill flailing her arms about. the way jim is urging her on, it reminds me of when the whole office is watching the dvd screensaver! interesting how this was written WAY before that!
2) a "no-jill list" and cooey... recipe for awesomeness. i love how "cooey" talks... especially "she sounds dewicious." ha!
3) "And don’t make any for momm-y,” HEE! so cute.
4) nice to see that parenthood hasn't matured them one bit. ;oP
5) jim dressing his daughter in the frilliest pink stuff (while having a one-sided conversation) makes me melt. and i love how proud he is at himself. and i'm loving the "pretty in pink" reference!
Date: November 08, 2009 04:37 pm Title: Three's A Party
I love baby Jill! This is so adorable. A lot of people pretty much butcher it when they try to write toddler-speak, but you've got it down! I love the arc of the chapter. I hope you continue for a while after the new baby arrives. Really, you don't have to wind down in a few chapters. We'll keep reading!
Date: November 08, 2009 06:39 am Title: Three's A Party
Smart!!! Jill's gonna be a big sister soon. I mean, she's gonna be a GREAT big sister soon.
10 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2009 01:32 pm Title: Three's A Party
Aw, lovefool, this was just delicious. First off, I used to read my baby (now 16) Goodnight, Moon every night, without fail, probably until he started school. I have such a soft spot for that book. I love how Jill talks to herself, as kids do, how she's so smart and adorable. Jim and Pam are such loving, fun parents, and so real. Awesome job, you. I'm going to savor these last chaps.
Date: November 06, 2009 10:35 am Title: Three's A Party
:) I have to say this is one of my FAVORITE chapters so far. I don't know what it is about it, maybe it's just this new baby that I'm so excited about that's making me a sucker, but I just LOVE it.. Really great job!
Date: November 06, 2009 07:06 am Title: Three's A Party
Believe it or not, I sat at work yesterday wondering if you were going to update this story anytime soon. I was actually wondering about Jill and how she was dealing with her impending sibling's arrival. So I was a bit giddy when I saw this had been updated today. YAY! This was a lovely chapter. You have created such an amazing little family with these three (soon to be four ;)) and I am sad to read it will be coming to an end soon. Meanwhile, I'll just continue to enjoy this little glimpse into their family life. This is truly a joy to read. Thank you so much for sharing.
Date: November 06, 2009 06:33 am Title: Three's A Party
All those years of experience gleaned from managing Michael Scott the manchild are coming in handy for the Halprets. Very cute story and the wet bed scenario should ring true with any exhausted parent. My favorite line was Jim saying that Jill was just as stubborn as her mother. Nice callback to "The Lover" and Michael's statement to Pam. I'm so glad you updated this - is there really any need to end it? *crosses fingers that you forget about that statement*
10 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2009 05:22 am Title: Three's A Party
One: Who says you can end this fic, like ever?
Two: BABYCAKES – I add cakes to everything and people get so mad at me lol.
Three: Poor Jilly, I’m an awesome baby sister, so I don’t know what it’s like waiting around for your little sister to show up, but my sister hated me – maybe if my parents had thrown her an awesome big sister party =(
Loved this chapter so much. More please, like pronto, k?
Date: November 05, 2009 09:31 pm Title: Three's A Party
Cute! Lots of chuckles :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2009 08:47 pm Title: Three's A Party
"Daddy you can't be a big sistah you're a boy. You gots a penis."
HOLY. MOTHER. EFFING. CRAP!!!!! i laughed so hard. that silent, hysterical laughing that sounds more like wheezing.
so much awesomeness in this chapter. the "three's a party, four's a crowd" campaign, being tucked in like a mummy, the princess unicorn nightgown (holy crap), the conversation between the sippy cup and the spoon... good lord. i'm going to be SO sad to see this go. i can't wait until jill meets her little sister!
Date: November 05, 2009 08:29 pm Title: Three's A Party
Someone needs to help me, I seem to trapped under the biggest pile of cute/awesome ever. Thank god for people like you, since we'll never get to see these things on the show.
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2009 03:45 pm Title: Labor Relations
i love this... perfect banter between the two of them without overdoing it (because come on... you can't really joke around during contractions.) and the sweet michael moments, like when he held her hand during the contraction, and at the very end, talking to jim. perfect little moments of michael sweetness, but again, without overdoing it.
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2009 05:30 am Title: Day Care
"woah-woahs"... holy crap. CUTE!
Date: September 19, 2009 08:22 pm Title: The Shower
Love, love, love, love this story all the time. This chapter was great. I love how well you nail all of the characters in the office.
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2009 08:15 pm Title: The Shower
I'm still fairly new to Office fic, but this is one of my favorites, so I was so excited to see an update :) This chapter was hilariously in-character and also very sweet. I'm excited to see the Halperts with their new baby, and I loved Pam's description of "what it feels like" at the end. Fantastic work!
Also, I was on Yahoo today, and this for some reason reminded me of Jim and Jill:
http://sports.yahoo.com/mlb/blog/big_league_stew/post/ModernTube-Young-Phillies-fan-rejects-dad-s-fou?urn=mlb,189941
Date: September 15, 2009 09:55 am Title: The Shower
So excited to see this updated. I keep hoping we'll see a baby shower this season. :)
Author's Response: Here's hoping we get a baby shower! With as many times as we had to put up with them rerunning "Baby Shower" we should at least be paid off with a JAM shower! lol