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Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 12:39 pm Title: Labor Relations

I just devoured all nine chapters....so well done, so sweet, so made me smile, so relieved my season 3 blues. The vision you have created of them as a couple is so believable and charming.    

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 09:49 am Title: Tickled Pink

So sweet.  "Pretty in Pink."

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 09:48 am Title: Tickled Pink

Little bits of just....love.  I will never get tired of reading these.  Please.  Keep 'em coming!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 09:28 am Title: Labor Relations

I love this whole series.  You really have the Jim and Pam dialog nailed down.  I love reading this series because I can really imagine that their lives would be like this in the future.  It also reminds me of when my husband and I had our first baby - thank you for that!!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 06:56 am Title: Tickled Pink

Okay, I think this is myfavorite chapter. And I am pretty sure that statement will stand until you post the next one.

See, those two just need to have sex, because it makes them happy.

Another episode callback, from Michael's Birthday, which I am about 90% sure was the first episode I ever saw. Ah, I have to remember to thank my friend for starting me on this crazy show which has devoured my brain.

I loved the No Jill list. And that it included everything from buttons to beer. And I almost typed Beet which made me think of Dwight. Dwight should be on the No Jill list. Haha.  

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 06:28 am Title: Cry Baby

I just realised I'm in love with this AU!Jim.

Also, Jill is the most adorable BobbleheadBaby and LoveFoolLoving kid I have ever read/heard of or imagined.

I really adore this story.  

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 05:10 am Title: Tickled Pink

Oh, LoveFool, people like you make JAM!angst worth braving!! The wet hair, the microphone, the Cooey [oh, the Cooey!: is that you, Pam? = absolutely genius/hilarious], the dressing, the Baker'sMan [adorable as always, because I know Jim wouldn't sing nursery rhymes unless he's alone or at gunpoint. :P], and - everything. I love this, and I am now going to read this whole thing again from the beginning, and then get to some of the others in your series, too. Awesome. :D 

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 01:16 am Title: Labor Relations

Oh. My. Gosh. The "Cooey" part had me rolling! Your Halpert trio is exactly how I'd picture them if Jim and Pam would finally get their act together! So adorable!

Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 11:20 pm Title: Tickled Pink

So so so so so cute!!! This story is LOVE!! So sweet.  I love the jim/jill interaction.  He is such a great daddy! Update soon!! :)

Reviewer: Snoznoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 10:39 pm Title: Excellent Grooming

haha lol theyre so CUTE! Theyre both MY favourite.

Author's Response: hahaha. Pam would love you for saying that! I love you for giving me feedback! :-)

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 11:48 pm Title: Excellent Grooming

Ok, so I'm gonna let you in on exactly how I work the whole MTT thing.  Throughout my work day, I sneak-check my e-mail to see if any favorites have been posted, and I look forward to reading them at home after work.  When I finally check MTT at home, I take stock of all the newly posted stories and open them in the order I want to read them - more than slightly obsessive compulsive, I know.  I always, always, save your stories for last because they make me so darn happy.  I can't stop smiling the whole time - I absolutely love everything you write.  And this series in particular I re-read whenever I need a pick-me-up. 

Also - good call on America's Next Top Model - it's priceless.



Author's Response: ok....when I first read this it made my night...and you just did it again. Thank you so much for telling me that. I DO that with my faves, so that means so much to me! THANKS A BUNCH!!!!!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 05:15 am Title: Excellent Grooming

This chapter is like all my guilty pleasures rolled into one.  Jim and Pam (and baby!) and ANTM.

One stop shopping. ;)



Author's Response: ;-) I aim to please!!!

Reviewer: jamband Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 03:37 pm Title: Labor Relations

There is so much awesome, I don't even know where to start, but I loathe Renee with her six-pack and her insecurity and her hating on Jael. And I don't think Pam would like her either.

Author's Response: oooh so annoying. I haven't seen it since the first episode that I watched at a friend's house...I'm gonna have to catch it again to see if she's still being a tool. lol. Thanks for the feedback!!!!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 09:47 am Title: Excellent Grooming

GAH!!! Lovefool! You astound me with how you can come up with this stuff! It just keeps getting better and better. Seriously, Jim tearing up over cutting her finger? Wow... Love the banter, love the detail with the baby, love everything. 

And this:  

He knew enough to let that comment slide....To respond to Pam right then would have been like launching a grenade into their living room.

.. brings me back to the reality that Jim is indeed a ficticious character, because really, no guy is that insightful. ^_^



Author's Response: ROFL. In our dream world, Jim can be that insightful. hehehe. Thanks so much for the consistent feedback StarShine. You ROCK! So happy you're continuing to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 08:50 am Title: Excellent Grooming

Yeah -- the nail clipping is nerve wracking alright!  Have I told you lately that Daddy!Jim is freaking adorable? 

And I wish you owned them too -- not only no hiatus, but there would be an adorable JamBaby ;o)



Author's Response: ::sigh::: a Jam Baby :::sigh::: just the thought gives me the warm and fuzzies. So glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 08:40 am Title: Excellent Grooming

I was *just* craving a new chapter of this yesterday! Yay.

This family is so cute I just want to shrink them and put them in a box where I can keep them in my room as pets! Is that weird?

Them competing over being favorite parent is hilarious! Although I agree with Pam - Jim's plan is a little unfair and flawed - 90% of kids go through a "my parents suck" phase the moment they hit their teen years!



Author's Response: LMAO...ok, DIED over that comment. And now I'm back to life...so ok, yes it's wierd - BUT I LOVE IT because I'm weird too!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 07:36 am Title: Excellent Grooming

What's more nerve-racking than trimming tiny baby nails? Aw, Jim. Honestly, this series almost makes me want to reproduce again (and trust me, this factory has reached its quota!) This was just what I needed today...happy thoughts.


Author's Response: ROFLMAO. This comment made my roommate and I laugh so hard! You crack me up! Thanks so much for the feedback!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 07:02 am Title: Excellent Grooming

children just aren't getting read to any more because of deviant behavior. drug testing was an amazing episode! i can just totally picture jill and she is cute.

god i need a life 



Author's Response: LMAO. One of my all time fave episodes. Glad it's one of yours too and you got the reference! :-)

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 06:41 am Title: Excellent Grooming

HOW much do I love this story?  SO much.  SOOOOO much!  You should have a tiara and be crowned the queen of babyfic :)

Author's Response: awww! Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 06:18 am Title: Excellent Grooming

This story makes me so crazy-happy, most of the time after I'm finished with a chapter I talk like asjklasjdlaskjdaslkdjaskldjasdk [this] and don't stop grinning. For a long time. 

...I'll just tell her about the time you cut her. OK, other than Jim almost crying because he accidentally cut a TINY bit of his daughter's finger [because that was, as you probably realise, the most adorable thing. ever.], I loved this line. Your banter in any story is just all-around awesome/brilliant, and this one was no exception.

Love this!!  



Author's Response: awwww. THANK YOU so much for such kind words! And I LOVE the fact that you speak like aoeiuojaogealkbe. THAT is the best compliment!

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 12:56 am Title: Excellent Grooming

Who better to raise a perfect girl than Jim Halpert? ;-)

This was wonderful and happy, as always. Manicure teasing and ANTM and parenting insecurities: one stop shopping for a happy Jim and Pam future that's a perfect antidote to the current Angst Hiatus.



Author's Response: hahah! Glad I could provide all your needs!

Reviewer: slpchic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2007 11:48 pm Title: Excellent Grooming

Too cute! Update soon!  I love this Halpert family!  It is totally scary to clip baby's nails!!  They are just too tiny! UPDATE SOON!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! A new chapter just posted! Hope you enjoy. :-)

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2007 09:12 pm Title: On Company Time

OMG!  I love every word of this story---this is so freaking cute.  I can't wait to read more!...there will be more right?

Author's Response:

of course there will be more! Some of it is up tonight! :-) Enjoy!

Reviewer: Snoznoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 10:16 pm Title: On Company Time

Lol i love your instant message stories - they're the best! Just Jim and Pam being hilarious Jim and Pam - awesome

 



Author's Response: They are TOO much fun to write. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 04:37 pm Title: On Company Time

Hee! So cute.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!!!

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