Date: March 15, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Five More Times Pam Lets Jim Walk Away
"Seen more passion in this strange dance that you've been doing with Pam than in the entire time that we've been seeing each other."
I *love* this line. I think it really highlights one of the faults of the Jim/Karen relationship- Jim just seems so apathetic about the whole thing. Great fic, overall.
10 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2007 06:08 pm Title: Five More Times Pam Lets Jim Walk Away
The ending of this is so cute! I love this story!!
Date: November 30, 2006 04:53 pm Title: Five More Times Pam Lets Jim Walk Away
Excellent story! All of these seem plausible, and I loved the characterization! Can't wait for more from you!
10 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2006 04:14 pm Title: Five More Times Pam Lets Jim Walk Away
"she lets out a year-old sigh" - indeed. This line jumped out at me b/c, well, that's what it really is.
Great effort on the 5 things meme, extra points for the happy ending.
Date: November 20, 2006 07:56 pm Title: Five More Times Pam Lets Jim Walk Away
I like it, a lot. I especially like the first section, with Jim saying she should be grateful - I can totally see him throwing that out there in anger. And "No Longer Being Stupid", awww, cute.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 12:57 pm Title: Five More Times Pam Lets Jim Walk Away
aww! so good! i love happy endings, especially when i thought it would originally end sadly.
5 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 10:58 am Title: Five More Times Pam Lets Jim Walk Away
more passion in this strange dance that you've been doing with Pam than in the entire time that we've been seeing each other.
Brilliant! Very good insight into their relationship.
the door flies open and Roy is realizing that he probably should have come yesterday.
Perfect! Oh, poor Roy.
8 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 09:48 am Title: Five More Times Pam Lets Jim Walk Away
Amen to celebrating "No Longer Being Stupid"! A nice list, and I always love a good "What the fuck, Pam" from Roy!
Author's Response: Haha. Yeah, that seems pretty in-character to me, I can't see him being violent or anything, but he's not timid when it comes to speaking his mind.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 07:28 am Title: Five More Times Pam Lets Jim Walk Away
I love these five thing fics, and this one had a great progression. You worked in so many key elements, but kept it direct and focused. And, here's to 'no longer being stupid.' They can't stop soon enuogh, as far as I'm concerned.
Author's Response:
The person that came up with the Five Things fics is... well, basically.. awesome. Thanks for the reveiw, Colette, it helps to know what works
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 07:15 am Title: Five More Times Pam Lets Jim Walk Away
Yay! Perfection. All of it.
Great job.
Author's Response: Hee, thanks, Proposals.