Reviews For A Resolution
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 
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Date: November 21, 2006 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
What an emotionally charged story. I wish there was a Chapter 2 so we can see what happens next.
Reviewer: lano Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2006 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: My best friend and I watched The Merger together, and during the parking lot scene she screamed, "Walk away, Pam! Walk away!" I hope they don't do this on the show, too. It would be a little unpleasant for a comedy.
8 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm hoping this isn't what they do to us on the show; hopefully Pam can fix things before it gets here (even if it seems like it's already to that point).
In any case, you created some really great visuals - I especially loved: "Out, he indicated with his thumb, we need to talk." - I love how simple and perfect this is.
Author's Response: My best friend and I watched The Merger together, and during the parking lot scene she screamed, "Walk away, Pam! Walk away!" I hope they don't do this on the show, too. It would be a little unpleasant for a comedy.
Reviewer: Par5 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2006 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
7 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Yikes, this was very dark and sad. I'd hate to think that once Pam confessed her feelings he would be so eager to leave, but that's always a possibility. There were a few spelling/grammar issues that you may want to have a beta run their eyes over.