9 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Any fic with poor Ryan being tortured by Kelly and others is alright in my book.
10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2006 12:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I hate Ryan. But you do him justice. Well done
8 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2006 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ryan has such a unique perspective on the office and the people around him, and I don't think that's explored often enough. You did a great job here, I think it's a very accurate take on how he would (and probably will) deal with being literally in the middle of that particular triangle.
10 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2006 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was very funny and true. I really cheered for Ryan when he said, "I could ask you the same thing," to Jim in the break room. I mean, seriously.
And really, this was my favorite line:
Surprisingly, there was no big party or announcement from Michael. Only a remark from Dwight saying that it's like Lost when slowly but surely some of the others started to leave the show.
I don't even watch Lost, and that made complete sense to me. I also love seeing Ryan move to Karen's old desk, so glad he's out of the middle of that triangle. Hee. This whole thing was so strangely gratifying to me. :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2006 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1
“So…that is really still going?” Jim laughs, leaning against the counter next to him.
Ryan swallows. “I could ask you the same thing.” He looks him directly in the eye before walking out of the room, door clattering shut behind him.
That was pure brilliance. I love it. Wish that would happen..
9 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
"It feels like his head is programmed to turn in a triangular direction." - Love that.
I think Ryan is probably pretty hard to write - you've done a great job here.
Date: November 21, 2006 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
He’s in the break room with Kelly when Jim comes in.
“Ryan I have to get back to work, but don’t forget to buy the tickets for Justin today okay? If him and Britney get back together and she’s at the concert and I miss it I will just die!”
The way this is formatted somehow led me to believe it was JIM asking for the tickets. Which was actually kind of hilarious, but not, I think, your intention.
Your Ryan is dead on. Alas, so is your Kelly. :) (Boy, she can be annoying. And we love her.)
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think your Ryan was perfectly him. Kelly confronting Karen was great - as was Ryan giving her a warning look and Ryan's interaction with Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ryan swallows. “I could ask you the same thing.” He looks him directly in the eye before walking out of the room, door clattering shut behind him.
I love when Ryan is a vicious. I loved this whole story, especially the visual Pam Pong, the pitch perfect Ryan and Kelly, and Dwight with another Lost reference. Yay!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved the Ryan POV here, and I think you really got his voice and thoughts. The exchange in the kitchen was fantastic--his "I could ask you the same thing" was great and it really brings a dimension to the Pam/Jim relationship that a lot of people don't like or shy away from--especially in fic. This was great to read :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really cool -- I like seeing Ryan's perspective on the threesome, since he seems pretty perceptive... except about his own life, of course.