10 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2007 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
That story was divine. I like these KaPamJimAndy friend/whatever fics!
9 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2007 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Oookaaayyy..... (which was my response to a couple of the segment punchlines). I think everyone else has said pretty much what I want to say about this, so I'll leave it at that.
10 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
WHA? Andy??
Where's Dwight?
Dude, I love this. The dynamics of all of them in this story is like a dream. It's awesome. Please tell me there's more.
cheers.
--Lex
10 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
WHA? Andy??
Where's Dwight?
Dude, I love this. The dynamics of all of them in this story is like a dream. It's awesome. Please tell me there's more.
cheers.
--Lex
10 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2006 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I totally love this, every single piece of it. Karen calling Jim a girl! ('cause he so is.) Angsty Pam in her pretty dress and the way you can be sad at a party. Girls night out WITH KISSING! The Michael line about not falling for two women at once was AMAZING, so ironic and hilarious and true to the show. And Pam and Karen's Cameron Diaz movie is *perfect*, and the Andy line had me in stitches. "Seriously, Jim." SO GREAT.
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
DELIGHTFUL. Loved it all day!
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh this is awesome! Nice work!!! I love how they can all live together in harmony...that's how it should be! :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
HA HA HA1 I have no idea why Andy is at Jim's house in the last one... but the whole hting was brilliant. Starting a rumour that Pam isthe town whore! HA HA HA!
9 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
These were all awesome, and genuine-feeling, and sometimes funny. The last one was especially laugh-out-loud funny. Andy rules.
Date: November 28, 2006 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was an interesting and different take on what relationships might develop in the office. I liked your take on Pam and Karen as accomplices in driving Jim crazy! Hee.
9 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm not a Jim/Karen fan, but this was a fun read. You made it seem like everything falls into place.
Date: November 28, 2006 11:33 am Title: Chapter 1
One other comment I forgot to make -- the timeline in the story is a little confusing; you might want to take a look at that. I'm not sure if it's all chronological or if it's purposefully out of order.
Author's Response:
I mentioned in the author notes that I had originally planned for these to be drabbles and then a "five things" so they weren't actually related to one another or set in the same storyworld. So while I tried to organize them in an understandable order, you are quite correct in noting that if read as one piece, they could seem out of order.
And I think I'm starting to confuse myself. :)
Date: November 28, 2006 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was really very funny. I love the character that you put into Karen; Pam and her becoming BFF, trying to give Pam all the experiences she'd never had, "Warehouse Willie" --? (I almost laughed really loudly at that, but then I remembered that I'm reading this at work.) The only thing I found odd was the insertion of Andy at the end - it seemed sort of put-on. I don't really know why Andy is there; he kind of came out of nowhere. Were you planning on explaining that? Was this going to continue? I love this new Jim/Pam/Karen dynamic that seems to be coming up in a lot of fics lately. I think you did this very well.
Author's Response:
I was worried about the Andy thing and while others pointed out they liked it, I'm glad you mentioned it. I have this idea- and it could be completely from left field - that there's this Andy/Jim friendship forming. It could be more one sided on Andy's part, though. Being part of the Stamford bunch, though, I could see Jim trying to include him in the invite to come over ahd play Call of Duty. Especially if he could help him kick Karen's butt.
And "Warehouse Willie" even had me giggling for a while. It's a really sad moment when you're alone in your apartment and laughing at your own fanfic. :)
Thanks so much for the feedback.
8 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this group of scenes and I really like your Karen.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm determined to make Karen likeable but I feared I would make her ooc in the process. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: November 28, 2006 08:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Hee, oh Andy. This was really cute -- it's great to read fic that isn't super angsty or sugary sweet, but that finds a good middle ground. Also loved that you kept Karen around :)
Author's Response:
Middle ground is good. It’s easier sometimes to go one way or the other so I was happy my muse was in the middle.
Thanks for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh! Wonderful! Fantastically i-character, and I love Andy just popping up at the end. :-)
Author's Response:
Good old Andy. I like the idea that while he may really annoy Jim at times, he's still kinda likeable. I can see Jim trying to be his friend.
Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
This amused the hell out of me. Who knew Karen could rock so hard? You did, obviously. I laughed so hard at the idea of Pam trying to become the town whore that my roommate was concerned for my health.
Pretty much awesome.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I like Karen. I’m still way in that camp that know Pam and Jim are in it for the long haul so I originally tried to not like Karen, but it’s just not working.
And I love the idea of Karen trying to help Pam become a bit of a rebel after learning she’s led a somewhat sheltered life.