Date: May 08, 2007 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow--this is really bittersweet. The lack of capitalization throws me a bit, but your phrasing is just beautiful. Very well done.
Date: February 10, 2007 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
its sad, but i have a list like that that reminds me of either JAM or one of the other fictional couples I am hopelessly romantic about. Its so sad. so many ordinary items make me just go "sigh, swoon, squee" whatever the case may be about that particular couple. haha
10 [Report This]Date: December 03, 2006 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sad, but so easy to see how this could happen.
Date: November 29, 2006 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the fic itself..but the lack of caps is a little distracting, even if it is your style. I really think your story would flow more easily if you had caps and definitive sentences beginnings/endings.
Date: November 29, 2006 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a great, little potential explanation of why Pam never makes that phone call. I have trouble understanding Pam, so thanks for this :) It was beautifully sad to read.
Date: November 29, 2006 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nooooooooo! Pam! Call him, you stupid!!
8 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 08:10 am Title: Chapter 1
This was an aching little piece and a good explanation for how sometimes it's easier to do nothing. Nice!