6 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2010 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this.
8 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2008 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hot...excellent job!
10 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2008 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Niiiice! I really like the 'upstairs at a party' fantasy for them, it's exciting!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa there! This makes me plenty happy :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2007 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!!!!
Date: May 29, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
the best part? Karen doesn't exit... muahahahaha! lol. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Duuuude this was great!
Date: January 14, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am so loving this Second Drink. And I wanted to be sure you got this photo of Jim in his Hawaiian shirt -- just for you, dearie!
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Happy New Year indeed! I have the mental picture of Pam in a sexy black dress surrounded by her male coworkers in Hawaiian shirts blowing those roll-out horns as confetti and balloons fall from the ceiling. Great story!
Date: November 29, 2006 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sex Kitten Pam. Rowr! Of course she couldn't wait to tear Jim's clothes off. The tone of the whole story was great. Sweet, sexy and determined to get its happy ending!
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Moxie, you rock! This was exactly what I wanted to read tonight.
Date: November 29, 2006 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
“Andy had Kev and I come over around five to set some tables and things up. So they've been drinking since at least then.”
It's supposed to be "Kev and me", but I'll assume it's a typo, because I've seen your other amazing work ;-)
Loved it. Keep going.
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
If only, moxie, if only. Pam sure had everything thought out. I like that she was ready to finally make a move, but that she still needed just a bit of liquid courage to get moving.
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
She spent hours trying to guess how much chest and body hair he had, based on the uncovered skin she'd already seen.
Hussy shout-out!
Yay! MissionaryJim takes a break!! Woo!
Author's Response:
Hussy shout-out!
Oh, of course! Because deep down, Pam really is the original JH hussy. And yes, I could have just lifted her descriptions of him right from the pages of TWoP! ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Now that made me smile. And really, who could ask for more? Pam totally took the number two most romantic "chick holiday" as it is sometimes referred, and totally OWNED IT. Despite these two being in somewhat of a static position on the show, I still love seeing things like this. It also made me think that it could be possible to show something like this on the show - not the hot sex, obviously - but Pam and Jim disappearing.
Date: November 29, 2006 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love you.
That is all.
Author's Response: hey, anything for you! :-)
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so great. Now can you submit it to the show so they can use that next year?
Author's Response: Oh! If only!
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I know not of this "Karen" that you speak of... see, this is what I've been needing!
Author's Response:
Don't worry, you didn't miss anything.. ;-)
Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes!!! this was brilliant. i loved seeing a more assertive, hot pam.
Author's Response: Thanks - it really needed done given what we've had to watch on tv lately!
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
As Kevin would say...H.O.T!!
Author's Response: T.H.A.N.K.S.! :-)
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Moxie, you rule!!! If Christmas doesn't bring us what we want, then surely the New Year will! And it is about time Pam just jumped Jim's bones. They can freaking talk it out later!
I love this line: ...the telltale signs of a woman who had just spent some serious quality time getting some action with a man with a face full of stubble. Gah!
Author's Response: Thanks, lisawoo! (and that line comes from my experience being married to a man who likes to grow his beard...!)
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Is it wrong I pretend I was Pam in this? Because, damn, Jim is beyond yowza.
Author's Response: Absolutely not wrong. I didn't do my job if you didn't want to be Pam! ;-)
Date: November 29, 2006 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1
"the waistbands of her nylons and her panties"
A woman who sets out to deliberately seduce a man is a fool if she wears anything but perfume or a tattoo under that little black dress. I mean, seriously, pantyhose? The modern equivalent of a chastity belt?
Jim gave her one of those lopsided smiles
God, how I love those smiles. Thanks for reminding me once again that the sexiest part of Jim Halpert is his sense of humor.
Jim laid back, unzipped his jeans and pulled them and his briefs off.
Congratulations. I believe you are the first Jamfuck writer I've read who didn't have Jim wearing those godawful boxer shorts like my grandfather used to wear. Jim in boxer shorts is like Creed in Spandex: total turnoff.
“Suicide attempt,” Pam suggested. “We can say I was distraught over having to spend New Year's Eve at Andy's and you talked me down off the ledge.”
These moments when Pam shows her stealth humor with Jim are the ones we love the most. Thanks for this.
“Because you love me,”
Now that was just a pure awwwwww moment.
She was sort of looking forward people noticing she'd been up to something with Jim.
Mmmm...no. I just don't see Pam as this much of an exhibitionist. She's a very private person.
“Tuna!” Andy shouted, “Get a room already!”
That line made me absolutely LOVE Andrew Bernard.
This whole thing was fun, but I think you need one more run past a proofreader. There were several times when typos like "One hair move upwards and entangled her fingers through his hair" pulled me out of the story, trying to puzzle out what it meant.
However, I think the ideas of the New Year's Eve party at Andy's, the Hawaiian shirts (how absurd on New Year's!) and the drinking game were completely on target. Thanks for helping us all get through the next few weeks...
Author's Response:
NEJ, thanks for one of the best reviews I've ever received - I really appreciate all your thoughts! I will agree immediately that I needed another proof reader. I'm currently fixing it up as we speak.
As for the pantyhose, I think Pam's experience is quite on par with her intentions for the night. It would surprise me if she had even thought about going without them - must less minus panties!
As for briefs, I've always kinda believed he's a brief man. I've used boxers in the past, but this time I just wrote what I saw.
The She was sort of looking forward to people line - I put that in on the heels of her being pleased with herself in the bathroom, but on the Nth look I do believe you are correct in that it doesn't quite jive with Pam. Thanks!
I appreciate the time you took to review!
Date: November 29, 2006 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Moxie! When you said you were going to deliver the smut, you weren't kidding. Why do I find it so amusing (and unspeakably hot) that Pam stays dressed while he's...well, naked? Thank you for this juicy detour out of angst-ville. Needed that!
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Her plan was simple: get a little drunk to lose the nervousness, make sure Jim got at least as drunk as she did, and then find a quiet room and throw herself at him. I like this plan. A good plan. A solid plan. When can we expect to see this plan put into action? Aw, hell. I'll just re-read this over and over and pretend it's reality. Thanks for the hope, Moxie! Oh, and also the smut...
Author's Response:
Yes, it's a plan that just makes so much sense, and doesn't have to be used only on New Year's Eve - it's good anytime! Nearly anywhere! What is *WRONG* with that girl??
(thanks for the review!)