Reviews For First Dates
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Reviewer: Erinsmith20 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2021 01:09 am Title: Love Letters

How have I missed this?? Soooo freaking good!

Reviewer: Clover Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2017 04:29 pm Title: Wooing - Jim's Superpower

Ohmygosh, I think this is the sweetest chapter I've ever read on this site! And I've read a LOT of sweet stuff here! Love this! :)

Reviewer: bkwrm Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2010 02:47 pm Title: A Fun New Game

Cute. Although we never got to see how Jim puts hit new knowledge to use.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2009 07:06 pm Title: Love Letters

damn.... that was amazing!

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2009 06:47 pm Title: Love Letters

i want a jim

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2009 06:45 pm Title: Love Letters

*swoons*

and i've only read the first chapter. i may just die from the fluff by the time i'm done!

Reviewer: uglyscientist Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2009 05:42 pm Title: Wooing - Jim's Superpower

this is one of about five fanfics i've read (probably out of more than 100) that has made me cry.

thank you.

Reviewer: uglyscientist Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2009 03:03 pm Title: It's Their Turn

i am truly and utterly speechless.

this is exactly, in every way imaginable, how i pictured their first date.

a little nervous, but not awkward, and containing a reemergence of their playfulness and jokes.

this was, in a word, perfect.

i'm off to go see what other brilliant things you've written.

Reviewer: uglyscientist Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 06:44 pm Title: Love Letters

this was nothing short of phenomenal.

holy crap.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2008 06:16 pm Title: A Fun New Game

This was great, you should definitely continue!!!

Reviewer: Blanca Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2008 02:51 pm Title: Love Letters

Wow, that was hot, and quite fun. I really enjoyed it! You clearly have a way with words. :-)

Reviewer: jbklover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 06:04 pm Title: Love Letters

oh that's good... love it... especially the last 2 chapters. keep it coming,luv...

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2008 03:21 am Title: A Fun New Game

Um, i think you need to write more. STAT. STAT means now! ^_^

Reviewer: untherapy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2008 03:11 am Title: A Fun New Game

awesome :) this is adorable

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2008 10:22 pm Title: A Fun New Game

This is very cute, please continue!

Reviewer: Jewelsy Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2008 07:23 pm Title: It's Their Turn

I enjoyed this date thoroughly. Love the waiter bit, my fave part though cheesy was the Jim sized hole in her soul. I have written some stuff too but yours is the first I ever commented on and I hope to post a story of my own soon. Hope you read it and tell me what you think. Nice work.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 09:41 pm Title: There it Was

I like the thought that he was just walking past the window and he couldn't help but be pulled into the store to get the ring.  Nice! :)

Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 08:12 pm Title: Love Letters

Love your story-short, sweet, and sexy. Incredible writing (I’m so envious). Love the letters and the premise. Jim’s prowess in the sack always amazes me. Lucky for us readers!

Reviewer: BlueBustyGal Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 08:08 pm Title: There it Was

Very sweet. The last phrase was really nice. 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 10:58 am Title: There it Was

Other things, you had to wait a while for what you wanted...

...but they were worth it.

 

So worth it. I love it. It makes me happier than it should.  

Reviewer: JamFan4000 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 07:27 am Title: Love Letters

This is so Pam-she doesn't talk about her feelings, but she would write Jim a letter telling him......This whole story was so good to read. You can write, no doubt about it. I will look for your stories, so get writing! Isn't school just about out?

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 05:43 am Title: There it Was

You're back again!  Sweet! And this is sweet, too: It was that very tangible, yet intangible difference between the love of friends…and the love of your life.  Well put.  Nice job!

Reviewer: conahan303 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2008 02:46 pm Title: Love Letters

Well done!!!(CLAP CLAP CLAP) Great story can't wait for the next one, really...I've been jonesin' for it.

Reviewer: Ruby Caspar Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2008 01:45 pm Title: Love Letters

Guh.

Wow.

That was amazing. An incredible end to a great story!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2008 11:38 am Title: Love Letters

Lexiconiful, as I live and breath!  I've missed this story and was thinking about it recently.  Love this:  “You’re still fluttering,” he whispered against her neck in a voice so gravely, she’d not have recognized it as his in any other situation. “I love the feel of it, Pam.” He moved his lips back up to her face. “I love you.”  Wow.  Hot and romantic. 

I hope all is well with you and hope for another fine story some time soon.

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