Date: January 29, 2007 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 11-- Sunday 4am
aww I love this chapter
Date: January 29, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 10--Saturday night
Don't apologize for this being long - chapters can never be too long! I loved the romance and building passion in this chapter. And this line was so sweet - and hot - “I’ll do whatever you want, Pam.”
10 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 13- Sunday-Cugino's
I just read this entire story in one sitting and I loved it! I can't wait to see what happens at this beach house :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2007 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 13- Sunday-Cugino's
I really hope you continue this!
Date: January 24, 2007 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 10--Saturday night
I love this series!! Please write more!! They're so sweet
Date: January 24, 2007 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 10--Saturday night
yay! so glad you decided to continue this! And the "throw the stick" comment -- BWAH! And I think it is sweet how they are so tentative in their new relationship. And who wouldn't have a tough time letting Jim leave her apartment?
Date: January 24, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 10--Saturday night
This is so adorable and you should definitely try some more! From your previous chapters you've proven to be good at this, continue onward! :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2006 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 8 -- Starr Hill, part II
Such a sweet story! And the last line was just perfect!!
Author's Response: Thanks, maybe I'll try some steamier stuff next. Just don't tell my Mom!
Date: December 09, 2006 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 8 -- Starr Hill, part II
I'm a sucker for some good cheese. I say leave the last line in!
8 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2006 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Friday
Oh God, now, now is good for me! screamed Pam on the inside.
Ha! Fantastic line.
8 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2006 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Monday Morning
I like the parallel structure in this first part. I also cringed in horrified anticipation of Karen and Pam's girl's night out- that's a wonderful disaster waiting to happen!
Author's Response: I wondered if anyone would notice that. It was fun to do! I wondered if I should have written the GNO chapter, then I decided to just allude to it.
Date: December 09, 2006 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 8 -- Starr Hill, part II
I had to write, to not only say that i loved it, but i was absolutely tickled by the mention of Starr Hill and Water Street (location of starbucks) - I used to live in Charlottesville and absolutely LOVE it there - so to combine my favorite show with my favorite place just warmed my heart a little :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Melissa. I guess you know where I live now....glad you liked it.
9 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2006 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Friday
Great chapter. Awesome tension.
Author's Response: Thanks. I need to write some more tension, I love those too!
Author's Response: Thanks. I need to write some more tension, I love those too!
8 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2006 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Monday morning, part II
I really like oblivious Karen and I love Karen catching Pam lick her lips. Classic.
Author's Response: I actually really like Karen. I feel sorry for her, she is doomed and doesn't yet know it.
Date: December 09, 2006 11:41 am Title: Chapter 8 -- Starr Hill, part II
Last line is DEFINTELY not cheesy -- I love it just the way it is!
Author's Response: Thanks! I guess I will write some mre...
Author's Response: Thanks! I guess I will write some mre...