1 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2022 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Pounce
The way they took turns looking at each other in the kitchen.... Perfection! I’ve read a lot of Jam fan fiction... I added this to my favorites. Well done!
1 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2020 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 10--Saturday night
aw that was a nice chapter
1 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2020 08:45 am Title: Chapter 10--Saturday night
aw that was a nice chapter
1 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2019 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 11-- Sunday 4am
I love shorter chapters! The longer ones are great too, though. This is very sweet.
1 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2019 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Monday Morning
I like how Jim is just planning to go in and the other two are putting on their "I'm just fine" faces. Nice detail.
Date: July 22, 2008 10:15 am Title: Chapter 4 - Friday
lol, the old moving furniture excuse...
Date: July 22, 2008 10:13 am Title: Chapter 3 - Tuesday
Oh no, PLEASE don't ask Phyllis... oh no. *frantically reading on*
Date: July 22, 2008 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1 - Monday Morning
Hey, not sure if you still want reviews, but I really like this so far! REALLY like how you set up Pam and Karen to have their thoughts parallel each other; Karen often gets painted as the villian, but you really described what was probably going on with her... moving is hard on anyone... anyway, I'm looking forward to reading on!
Date: February 09, 2007 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 20 -- The Next Morning
I loved the whole thing from start to finish. And such a nice touch with them staying in bed all week at the end!:-D They deserve some good, good times. Am definately going to reread it at some point, probably next week, heh. And then again. Btw, looks like it's your only story here. Girl, you really need to keep writing!!! Your language and style is so sexy and literary without being over the top in either of these aspects. It's not easy making sex scenes so natural and honest, but nowhere near vulgar or cringy. Big props for your work and you better get back down to writing fics now!;-)
Author's Response: Wow, tigger. Thanks. This is my first fan fic ever and first sex scenes ever. I didn't think I could do the sex scenes, honestly. Then I read Here Comes Treble's great scene and decided to try it. I took off my filters and went for it. Yikes. I told myself to just write it and I didn't have to post it. That helped me I think. Once it was done I quick posted it before I chickened out! Thanks for the encouragement, it means a lot to me.
Date: February 02, 2007 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 20 -- The Next Morning
Bravo my sweets!!!! Bravo...Now what is this life in which you speak?
Date: February 02, 2007 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 20 -- The Next Morning
i didn't review last chapter because i was still too gobsmacked, for lack of a better word. wow. very spicy. i think i mostly liked this story, a little fluffy but over all pretty good but i find the stories i like the most are more subtle. don't get me wrong - i want pam and jim to get it on as much as anyone else but there is something a little sexier about not going into as much detail, you know? sorry - i hate being critical, but that was just my two cents on the racy chapter. on a differnt not - kudos to you for having the balls to write it! wow. i would never be able to write that stuff. does you mom know about this? (kidding!)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the opinion, super_perfect. I apprecate your taking the time to tell me what you think. I agree, I usually like the subtle stuff better also. I was inspired by HereComesTreble's super hot scene against the oven recently. I thought, Wow, that was hot! I wonder if I could write something like that? So I deceded to try it. Maybe it didn't fit really with the sweet fluff of most of the rest of the story though.
I'll try more subtle next. My favorite stuff actually is the internal diaglogue mixed with what is going on. I really love that. Thanks again.
Date: February 02, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 20 -- The Next Morning
so sorry for the lack of response to the last chapter. there was this problem of picking myself up off the floor after swooning and falling out of my chair. it was awesome. so perfectly jim and pam. you did a great job with this. what better way to finish it out but JAM! :)
Date: February 02, 2007 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 20 -- The Next Morning
so hot and adorable and just awesome. wow.
10 [Report This]Date: February 02, 2007 11:15 am Title: Chapter 20 -- The Next Morning
aww i'm sad this story is over! those last two chapters were HOT!
Date: February 02, 2007 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1 - Monday Morning
I think you did not get alot of reviews becasue it's no longer possible for people to submit anonymous reviews. Anyway- I really enjoyed the whole story and I think you did a very good job with the sex...it was very sensuous and believable.
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out, Greenever123. I hadn't realized that changed. Thanks for the encouragement!
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2007 08:54 am Title: Chapter 19 - Surrender
Your Mama would be so proud...Whats her email address again?
Date: January 31, 2007 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Travelling
I really needed sweet and fluffy tonight, thanks! And as I read this I was eating a slice of pepperoni pizza! I pounced on both the story and the pizza. Now that's cheesy!
10 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2007 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Pounce
I was gone most the day but left the last page up on my computer. When I logged back on and hit refresh I was extremely excited...I POUNCED right on this last chapter..Well not actually "Pounced" but I did read it very quickly!!!!
Date: January 31, 2007 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Pounce
this story's so fun, i love it! we all love a good tease...
Date: January 31, 2007 09:24 am Title: Chapter 16 - Monday
How about just screaming the word pounce while jumping on top of him... I'd be alright with that. Update soon!
Date: January 31, 2007 06:37 am Title: Chapter 15-- Arrival
forget cheese, it's awesome! and you're getting the tone perfect for Jim and Pam. i love it.
Date: January 30, 2007 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 15-- Arrival
awww I love it!! Keep going it's so cute
Date: January 30, 2007 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 15-- Arrival
Do not apologize, it's adorable and sweet. Just what the office needs to start doing. Now.
Date: January 30, 2007 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 13- Sunday-Cugino's
just read all from beginning to end. i'm enjoying-i'll tune in as soon as you write more!
Date: January 29, 2007 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 13- Sunday-Cugino's
AHHH keep writing! I love this series you're doing a great job