Date: November 26, 2007 01:05 pm Title: It's a little weird
What a great plot! I hope you decide to finish it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2007 06:59 pm Title: It's a little weird
You have to hurry up and finish this! Move it, move it!
10 [Report This]Date: December 16, 2006 04:52 pm Title: It's a little weird
I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this! You've set up the scene quite nicely. I like Jim's "lesser of two evils" approach to Dwight. I've always had a soft spot for Jim-Dwight friendship.
Date: December 16, 2006 04:30 pm Title: It's a little weird
A night out only with the guys at a karaoke bar? Oh Andy and Michael. Jim lying to Karen? [Jim]Interesting.[/Jim] It is a great ensemble piece; can't wait to read more.
10 [Report This]Date: December 15, 2006 11:44 am Title: It's a little weird
You are sooo good at taking on the whole ensemble. I think (hope) I've mentioned it before and I am forever envious.
I'm on pins and needles. Write more!!!
9 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2006 10:42 am Title: It's a little weird
Not only are Jim and Pam just lovely here, but you also really knocked it out of the park with the office ensemble - particularly Dwight, Andy, and Angela. Oh, and the twinkle in Phyllis' eye, and Stanley's perfect, "I am on a call."
Okay, so you rocked the whole office. Still, my favorite moment is Andy's contribution of: "Pillaging." Seriously, I almost died. I don't know why; it was just so Andy.
I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Ah... Andy. He really is one of my favorite characters. Tonight just gave me a little more ammo to work with (no pun intended ... "POWWWWW!" HA!) Thanks for the great compliments. I am definitely looking forward to continuing it; I just need to find some time.
9 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2006 09:06 am Title: It's a little weird
Wow, I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed that! I'm instantly hooked on this story. I really feel like you wrote their awkwardness so incredibly well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2006 09:01 am Title: It's a little weird
This is so good! and I agree, does feel so much like a real episode! You have done a great job finding the voices of the characters taking the story in a completely logically direction. I love the cameramen and their almost attempts at interference.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I am obsessed with the cameramen and what they're doing; I almost always write them in somewhere. I couldn't do it as well as Sophia Jirafe's latest, but I appreciate the kind words.
Date: December 14, 2006 08:55 am Title: It's a little weird
It's already been said, but this really does have the feel of a real episode! And because you can never hear it enough, I really loved this and can't wait to see where it picks up.
Author's Response: Ha, thanks. I really appreciate that. I think it's an awesome compliment to hear that.
10 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2006 06:10 am Title: It's a little weird
Ooh, I really like this so far. It feels like an actual episode. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I like writing stuff that I feel could sort of happen. Obviously, in fanfic, it's more about Jim and Pam (hee) but, you know -- you gotta give everyone some love. There's so much goodness in the office.
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 11:50 pm Title: It's a little weird
Okay, you def need to continue this...because i am loving this and i desperatly need some JAM longing/eventual hook-up-ness (did that make sense? i hope so)...oh and i don't mean to nit pick at all but Fergie was never on the "Mickey Mouse Club", MMC to the cool people (wow i'm a dork)....she was on "Kids Incorporated" then again maybe you did it on purpose because after all Dwight said it...anyway please continue!
Author's Response:
OMG, thanks for pointing that out. No, that was just me being an idiot, I think Dwight is a stickler for details and would have gotten that right. Anyway, I fixed it now. I used to watch that show, too. Doh.
I, too, really want to see Jim and Pam get together. We'll just have to live it out in our stories for now...
9 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 10:54 pm Title: It's a little weird
The only complaint I have is that there isn't more. Shame.
I love the pendant, the new clothes (that Jim notices), the kareoke (?) pranks, Jim's attitude towards Andy - all of it. Wonderful.
Author's Response: Ha, thanks. I already have an idea where it's going to pick up, so I guess I'll need to work on it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 10:35 pm Title: It's a little weird
PLEASE...KEEP>...GOING!
Author's Response: Hee... thanks for that. You read ... really quickly. Heh.