Date: January 01, 2010 11:16 pm Title: just another piece of the puzzle
ohh my gosh i love it. i wish there were more talks like these in the office. they are the best!!!!!
one more think i search the story Labor Relations and i couldnt find it, could u link it for me..thanks
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2008 01:29 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
Too cute! The last line "let's do this" was perfect.
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2008 10:40 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
This has to be the most adorable, well-written babyfic I've ever read :D
You got the dialouge so perfect and it made the story absolutely 100% realistic! It would be amazing if you wrote another one like this!
9 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2008 06:17 pm Title: just another piece of the puzzle
I really love this chat!!
Date: June 22, 2007 07:08 pm Title: just another piece of the puzzle
Awww! The end.... gah!!! So awesome. Great series, LoveFool, great series....
Date: April 14, 2007 11:47 pm Title: just another piece of the puzzle
This was so fun. Great dialogue in IM form! So spot-on in character throughout. Love the witty banter. And great ending. Nicely done!
Date: December 23, 2006 04:21 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
OMG thats so cute! It's funny I can imagine that happening so well... just a sign that they're meant to be together forever
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2006 11:18 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
Awww, I loved this!! So sweet, and so in-character.
Date: December 19, 2006 08:34 pm Title: just another piece of the puzzle
LOVED IT! you've seriously NAILED their characters in all the dialogue you write. and honestly, i don't give a crap about chronology.. just give me more!! ^_^
Date: December 19, 2006 07:02 pm Title: just another piece of the puzzle
Wow. I love (Italics and all!) your Jim and Pam. Love. Completely in character and authentic, they are absolutely adorable. Your stuff never fails to make me smile ... Probably because the AU you've created feels so real. Perfect. Please keep up the incredible work and continue adding to this world. Out of order or no ... It's a personal favorite. :)
9 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 03:03 pm Title: just another piece of the puzzle
I kinda love you for this. Cute, fun, sweet, and so in their voices - although I agree with Jim that IMing to alert him of her contractions was a little unorthodox! But I'm glad I got to read it. :)
Date: December 19, 2006 12:39 pm Title: just another piece of the puzzle
Cute.
Date: December 19, 2006 12:08 pm Title: just another piece of the puzzle
Dialogue between Jim and Pam is always fun to read. That was really cute!
9 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 10:22 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
That was probably one of the cutest things that I have ever read! I really think that you portrayed them quite well, and definitely stayed with their characters.
10 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 09:59 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
I've read this three times straight through now. It's amazing. The voices are so amazingly spot-on. It's hilarious, too, just like we're sure they will be together. Even the fight sounds right- very, very realistic. This is just amazing. Someday, right? Please?
Date: December 19, 2006 09:44 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
This is freaking adorable. I love me some BabyFic. And this: I hate it when you’ve got jellybeans that you really, really like…and then other people come over and stare at them. Hee!
Date: December 19, 2006 08:13 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
ohhhhh I love this! So funny! Too many great lines to quote. Love the bit about Kelly and implanting, and the I'm fat conversation... Your take on preggers!Jam is just great, and never too sappy! Keep 'em coming, and for the love of god, please don't worry about chronology!
Date: December 19, 2006 07:58 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
This was totally fun and sounded just like them - just the way I'd imagine them being together in that situation...sweet and sexy and nervous and excited and all that good stuff. Thanks for that!
Date: December 19, 2006 07:41 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
Adorable. Your brand of fluff is soooo addicting.
I'm anxiously awaiting the next dose. :)
Date: December 19, 2006 06:25 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
Aw. This was so adorable. I'm usually wary of IM fics, but this was so in character and cute. What a way to wake up this morning. Thanks.
Date: December 19, 2006 12:49 am Title: just another piece of the puzzle
Words cannot describe my love for this. Adorable and very funny and totally in character and, and, and... Brilliant. You've captured them perfectly!