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Reviewer: Promethea Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 07:23 am Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

Fabulous.  And Toby was the saddest of all.  They left in the NIGHT?  God.  What did he do to deserve that? 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 04:05 pm Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

Short of killing yourself, maybe there really isn't a way to leave Kelly Kapoor.

*snort* Funny. I like it. 

The Creed story is beautiful. Two sentences, no more, no less, and that's all it needs. Perfect.

All of these show a lot of insight into the characters. Well done. 

Reviewer: bright red shirt Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2006 01:51 pm Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

Oops, Paul Simon on the mind. I meant to say I can't hear that line without thinking of The Office.

Reviewer: bright red shirt Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2006 01:50 pm Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

Wow, this was fantastic. It was really sad and just...wonderful.

Nice touch with the Paul Simon too. Don't be coy, Roy. I can't hear that line without thinking of Paul Simon.

Author's Response: Hahah, that line is where I came up with the idea! At first I thought maybe I'd do a whole bunch of Pam-Roy breakup scenarios...and then I was like nah, I'd rather the whole cast get to experience the heartbreak, heh.

Reviewer: sicokitty Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2006 12:31 pm Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

ok that last line is just a brilliant laugh out loud moment. hee!

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 04:27 pm Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

"You know, these don't seem so funny when you hear them one after another..." That was wonderful! I guess you never realized how bleak everyone's lives can seem at times, but I love how in character it all was. Great job!

Reviewer: Pixel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 09:24 am Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

I loved this.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2006 02:31 am Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

This was great. I really loved the last line.

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2006 08:33 pm Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

I laughed. I cried. Each of these little beats were wonderful.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2006 12:59 pm Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

Sad and sweet and funny. Nice vignettes, true to character.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2006 12:25 pm Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

Is it wrong that the only thing I can focus on is that Roy is cancelling the wedding?

(This was perfect in tone. Very in-character for all of them. Beautiful job!)

Reviewer: swestworld Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2006 11:18 am Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

Very sad but also laugh out loud funny in parts. Loved it!

Reviewer: ribbon Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2006 03:44 am Title: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover

Wonderful, and so sad!

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