9 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aaannnddd another great story from unfold. Love the conversation at the end. That one really happened, I am pretty sure. I am so obsessed with this show that I think of it as reality now!
Date: April 29, 2007 03:41 am Title: Chapter 1
So, SO amazingly beautiful. I adore it. *sigh*
Date: January 11, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Stories like this are the reason fanfiction is poisonous. They're the reason I keep poisoning myself with it. Please continue to rock on with your unbelievably talented self.
Date: December 24, 2006 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
So beautifully romantic.
8 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2006 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1
As it's set in a (hopefully not-too-distant) happy JAM future, I really liked how tender this was. There's nothing wrong with urgency when it comes to Jim and Pam getting busy, but the sweet way you wrote this made me think of how comfortable and happy they'll be together, eventually.
Nice work!
10 [Report This]Date: December 20, 2006 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Finally, finally. *sigh* Lovely.
Date: December 20, 2006 03:32 am Title: Chapter 1
So gracefully written, as usual. The sheets over their heads, Jim not sleeping because he doesn't want to take it for granted...so many touches that make it sing. And, somehow, this just really nailed joyful, sexy, head-over-heels, morning-after 'Jim' to me: 'Fine, but the next light is long and it's going to turn red for me and I'm going to kiss you.'
Date: December 19, 2006 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Her eyes move beneath her eyelids and he tries to listen to the stories they’re trying to tell. ::sigh:: That's just one example of many. This was absolutely gorgeous.
8 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is breathtaking. No exaggeration. I want this to be Jim and Pam, right now. I had about ten lines that I wanted to quote but that's too many, so I'll just say that it's all perfect. Yeah, you rock [/Michael].
Date: December 19, 2006 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Something about the image of their love being as pure as the white sheets just really has stuck with me. If you really go with the metaphor, it's actually a quite beautiful thing. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
cheers.
--Lex
10 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness. So, so beautiful.
10 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This little bit of happyness is always much needed and appreciated. You made everything seem so simple, so natural, which I guess it is when you're in love and you finally, finally get what you want.
Date: December 19, 2006 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, happiness! This is great: Everything’s different. Damn straight!! And the bit about the sheets. Very nice.
Date: December 19, 2006 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing! I loved it! So sweet and sensual all at once!
Date: December 19, 2006 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
This?
He was thinking at the time that it was the happiest moment of his life, that nothing would ever surpass it, nothing would ever feel the same to him as smiling against her skin felt.
Is my favorite. And I love their conversation on the way to work. Perfect.
10 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so hot and romantic and funny...."Get milk tonight." is totally hilarious. Awesome blossom, extra awesome!