Date: January 07, 2007 07:25 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas
OK How's this for a constructive review: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! LOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Very well done. :-D
Thanks!!!!!
Date: January 06, 2007 11:38 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas
Awww! So very sweet, I am a complete and utter sucker for anything in movies/fics/books that involves romantice dancing so I loved the ending!
Only thing that felt a little off, is I can't see Jim flaunting his relationship with Pam in front of Roy. Especially this season it would come off as very mean.
Parma is Pam's friend?! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
thanks for the comments, chicgeek! I have to say that I thought about the roy scene a bit before adding it, and for the very reason you give. In the end I thought that Jim might do it because of a few factors: (1) it was a spontaneous instinct, and he didn't actually think about what Roy's reaction would be. It was a 'guy' thing, and we've seen Jim be a total dick before. (2) he's still a bit in a euphoric period in his ability to believe/understand that he and Pam are finally together. I can totally believe that when he thinks about it later, he might agree it was a stupid thing to do. But let's face it, deep down he doesn't like Roy for the way he's treated Pam over the years. I don't think you can blame him for wanting to be a jerk to him sometimes.
Hope that explains my thinking on that... and thanks for commenting!!
Date: January 06, 2007 10:19 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas
One of the best movies ever. I saw it a few months ago and completely fell in love with it and all of its cheesyness but seriously how could you not. Thanks for the great update. :D
Date: January 06, 2007 08:07 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas
Dancing in the living room? *lets out happy sigh* Wonderful image.
Author's Response:
hehe - I'm just trying to counteract your deep dark angsty stuff... ;-D
(which you know I'm reading!!!)
Date: January 06, 2007 08:00 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas
I love Strictly Ballroom so kudos to you. I think you already know how much I am loving this story, so I'll try to go with a new compliment tonight. I was 9 stories behind, and I read all of them before yours...I save MTLGtM for dessert if you will. Oh and I'm completely intrigued as to what Pam was up to today.
Date: January 06, 2007 07:53 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas
Dude. The night before last I totally had a dream that resulted in me waking up completely convinced that Pam's art class was responsible for giving these gifts. And now you go and give us a big hint in that direction. I feel so prescient.
Also? Apparently this story is so good that I'm having dreams about it.
Author's Response:
Wow. Now that's a review you don't read everyday! :-)
There are certainly many things still to be discovered.....
Date: January 06, 2007 07:42 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas
you. are. KILLING. me. seriously.. i'm checking like, 10 times a day for updates on your story... i'm so in love with this!!!!
Date: January 06, 2007 07:36 pm Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
Great chapter. You have their voices down so perfectly. You told us what the rest of Jim's evening activities will be. Mine will be running out to the store for some Chunky Monkey!
10 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2007 07:24 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas
I freakin' love that movie! I am so glad that you included it in "Nine Ladies Dancing!"
I'm so curious as to what Pam's secret trip was about...
As always, brilliant!
10 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2007 07:24 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas
OMG, Moxie -- I was wondering about when Pam would actually utter those three little words to Jim. You are forgiven for making us wait for this chapter. Sooo good [/Jim]
Loved Jim 'staking his claim' in front of Roy. Total guy thing to do. Hee! And Strictly Ballroom? YESSS! And the Pam/Parma connection is just killing me! And of course I have as many questions as Jim does in the beginning of the chapter, plus I am dying to know where Pam was all day. So, of course, I am going to be insanely checking TWoP and the recent stories page here waiting for Day 10. You are killing me, Moxie!
10 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2007 03:07 pm Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
Evening activities..hahahahaha
Every chapter gets better and better. You killing me. I'm so intriged with this storyline. I love it. I cannot wait till the next update. But then again I say that everytime I comment don't I? I'm having a hankerin for the Chucky Monkey now...Thanks, thanks alot....janet
8 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2007 02:59 pm Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
Hee! Way to grab my attention with the first sentence. And I love how they both made a little more effort (or less in Jim's case) on their appearance for each other. And the stairwell scene. And the makeout at the end. Whew! Great stuff.
Date: January 05, 2007 01:43 pm Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
I've been meaning to read this one for a while, but I just read the first eight chapters right in a row. I absolutely love it, and can't wait for the next four chapters. It seems so true to the characters, and I love the level of steam, and the anticipation of more steam to come.
Date: January 05, 2007 01:22 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas
OMG this is fantastic! I just read it all up to chapter 8 in one sitting. I wanted to die when I realized it was not finished!
I have a super creepy feeling the gift sender is going to be Ryan.
Loved the masturbating Jim. What about poor Pam??? Please finish it soon, it's killing me!!
Date: January 05, 2007 09:39 am Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
Loved this chapter. This was such a romantic chapter to read. And A+ for the Ben and Jerry's . Yumm
Date: January 05, 2007 07:42 am Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
I think I might be hungry for Greek food tonight. Didn't I hear you mentioned a new place called Steve's the other day? Starting to hanker are we? ;-) Better hurry up and finish this before you leave town! Another satisfying chapter - ice cream, stubble, self-pleasuring Jim with the kung-fu grip...
Author's Response:
self-pleasuring Jim with the kung-fu grip...
I hear Mattel is bringing a line of Office Action Figures out this spring. Hope they remember to add that one! :-)
And there's nothing wrong with adding a bit of my own life and preferences into the story, now is there? ;-)
Date: January 05, 2007 07:26 am Title: On The Sixth Day of Christmas
He wondered what would happen come tomorrow morning, but for now she was here, and that certainly was a fine start. Amen to that, sister.
Date: January 05, 2007 07:25 am Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
If this wasn't sweet enough already, now there's ice cream involved! Have to say, Moxie, that your Pam has veritable superpowers of self-restraint (as was first evidenced in DL), and you have a gift for writing, how do I put this delicately, Jim making friends with his hand (again, I site DL as precedent.) Yummy all around.
Author's Response:
What can I say? I just can't imagine the poor boy having NO means of gratification - that's just mean! And I am trying very hard to be polite about it!
And this Pam is no way as patient as DL Pam. I can assure you of that!! :-D
10 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2007 07:05 am Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
I love long updates! This chapter was a blast to read; I'm jealous of Jim's eight present!
Date: January 05, 2007 06:21 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas
This is absolutley adorable. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the fic.
Date: January 05, 2007 05:20 am Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
GAH. Moxie. Just....LOVE YOU.
Author's Response:
LOL - I'm assuming that strangled sound is a good thing?
Thanks - you know I love you too!!!
Date: January 05, 2007 01:35 am Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
Ooh, that hit the spot like Brownie Batter ice cream! You know, I was going to point out to you in the last chapter that Parma shouldn't know Pam's name, then realized you were probably going somewhere with that!
Date: January 05, 2007 12:42 am Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
Nutz, I just read the entire thing so far and it is fantastic. Please come back soon and continue with more.
Date: January 04, 2007 11:51 pm Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
totally loving this! your dialogue is great, especially in this chapter: stanley and dwight and of course jim and pam! so dead on.
will be sad when it is over, but so thrilled with each new day.
Date: January 04, 2007 11:46 pm Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas
Masturbating!Jim may be the hottest thing I've read on these boards this year. Wow.