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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2024 12:11 pm Title: Pick Up Lines

Extremely funny, especially the pink panties disaster.

Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2010 02:37 am Title: Pick Up Lines

i love IM conversations. and the pantys thing WOW

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 09:40 pm Title: Pick Up Lines

I just love this!  It is great!  I think I like the hot pink panties the best.  I envision Michael showing them to Jan and ...

Reviewer: analoggirl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Pick Up Lines

That was so funny and cute and completely in character. Loved it!

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2007 08:31 am Title: Pick Up Lines

I don't know how this one escaped me until now.  Pitch perfect, all the way through.  Loved the pink panties, Pam trying to hide her screen from her mom and Jim teasing her about it.  So great.

 

Reviewer: chiquiti Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 02:01 pm Title: Pick Up Lines

too cute. my favourite is the one about Dwight's farm.. you write very realistically. i am still laughing, a little bit :)

Reviewer: StarryDreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Pick Up Lines

Ugh!!!!  How you destroy me!  Your stuff is so fantastic- like a great bagel: all light and fluffy and filled with goodness (yikes, sorry 'bout that, I just compared your writing to a bagel!)  But, dang girl- great stuff!!! 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Pick Up Lines

I probably wasn't reviewing yet when I first read this.  It's really wonderful.

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 02:10 pm Title: Pick Up Lines

This is by far the most addictive story on the site. I can't read it enough. Great job!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2007 04:42 pm Title: Pick Up Lines

You are just the best.  I love all your fluffy goodness.  Great theapy for S3 blues.

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2007 05:29 pm Title: Pick Up Lines

This is not the first time I've read this, and it still made me laugh out loud...great job with their comfortable friendly tone, really cute, romantic, and funny....Yeay!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2007 11:08 am Title: Pick Up Lines

You write very good banter for them... Very much in character and made me giggle a lot! 

JHalpert: Alright, alright…Mostly I love it when you run around the office without panties.

PBeesly: ::sigh::

 

Ha! 

 

This was so funny, because I agree with Jim that this kind of cheesiness must be snickered at:

JHalpert: ‘Cop to it’?…it sounds like we stole something Pam.

PBeesly: My heart Jim…my heart.

JHalpert: Shut up.

Reviewer: Semby Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 04:09 pm Title: Pick Up Lines

Oh, my God, I love this so much. I was giggling the whole way through. The panties. Pam jumping up in front of her computer to hide it from her mom. "Guess what? I love you." So sweet! I love how fun they are. I could read it again and again.

Reviewer: annagirl93 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 08:01 am Title: Pick Up Lines

omg, so cute. i loved it! especially the panties thing...i honestly would love it if that happened on the show.

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 07:03 am Title: Pick Up Lines

Oh, I'm so happy to see this after the heartbreak of last night!  Another great one - thanks!  Oh, and this? <em>In my world, we don’t cheat on our dead spouses with family members…only with hot celebrities.</em> Awesome :)

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 06:20 am Title: Pick Up Lines

So you are pretty much my hero for today.  This is sweet, perfect, adorable, and exactly what I needed to read.

Their voices in this (even though they're IMing) are just so dead-on and their conversations with each other are just so perfectly them.  I really, really love this.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 06:06 am Title: Pick Up Lines

hot pink panties -- oh my -- and a shout out to JF's brother-in-law -- these are awesome -- love your collections of JAM IM's!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 05:24 am Title: Pick Up Lines

The perfect antidote to seeing Pam crying last night. I love these little exchanges...Jim counting the minutes til their married, the conversation about her mother, it's all just so sweet and funny. Their voices are great (And now I have to pay for it?; I love it when you run around the office...; that's refreshing, Pam...) Just really delightful.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 05:23 am Title: Pick Up Lines

Seriously - you need to better market your adorability. ;) You'd make a killing.

Your voices are sheer perfection.  Panties...Jim's mom???  Just fantastic.

Reviewer: Paper Jam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 01:46 am Title: Pick Up Lines

I love your IM fics! Yay! I grinned the whole way through. My favourite parts were Pam's missing panties, the reference to teenagers using Dwight's farm for sex and the awesomely meta Scott Foley shout-out.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2007 12:02 am Title: Pick Up Lines

this was perfect! exactly how i imagine jam would talk to each other online. completely in character!!! love.

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