Date: February 04, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Go Pam, so glad she went to work. Can't wait to see who Kelly fixes her up with.
Date: February 04, 2007 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
I love InControl!Pam. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Date: February 04, 2007 09:41 am Title: Chapter 1
More, please!
Date: February 04, 2007 08:33 am Title: Chapter 3
This is the situation i've been wanting to see since "Ben Franklin" - it's about time Pam said enough is enough. Seriously, post again soon because I can't wait to read where you go from here.
Date: February 03, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
i wanna know what happens next... it left me hanging
Date: January 28, 2007 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a great piece and I love the part where he turns to say "we're not finished here", or something to that effect. I'm telling you chills right there! Please post the next part soon and feed my JAM addiction.
Date: January 18, 2007 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
hello. please right more. i adore this.
Date: January 16, 2007 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Her honesty rules, her nobility makes her sad. Seriously, Pam, don't you know you were *seconds* away from getting exactly what you want before you started thinking of poor Karen? What about poor Pam and Jim? Looking forward to them sorting this mess out!
Date: January 16, 2007 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh how I wish they were both evil-er (lol!) I mean for once - forget about who he's with or she's with and just let themselves be happy. Then again - that said - I think this way is more realistic - even if it's torturous. Looking forward to more!
Date: January 16, 2007 02:53 am Title: Chapter 2
Well at least, they are on the same page. Sort of. Pam's feelings are out there! I am looking forward to more.
Date: January 15, 2007 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh this is good stuff! Bring on chapter 3!!! Ugh, get these two crazy kids together, will you? hehe
Date: January 15, 2007 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
OK, I won't hate you as long as you write some resolution! It is totally believeable that if Jim & Karen are still involved that Pam would put on the brakes in one form or another. But Jim has to know that he is fooling himself by trying to be with Karen. Soooo looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: January 15, 2007 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think it would be so cute if they really did something like this in the show! There will be a happy ending though right?? Can't wait to see!
Date: January 15, 2007 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
This isr really good and somehwat what I see actually happening on the show. Anyway, very well written!
Date: January 14, 2007 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Eeeee! More!
Date: January 13, 2007 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
GAH!!
I fell off (the edge of) my chair!!
Is there more? Tell me there's more!!!
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: January 13, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, go Beasely. What an ending for a chapter. Now you must update soon.
Date: January 13, 2007 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
*flailing speechlessly* I must know what happens next!
Date: January 13, 2007 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely adore this:
Jim listened to her rambling in amusement. “Tell her what, Beesley?”
Tell her that she’s the luckiest woman in the world. Tell her that I would give anything to be in her place. Tell her that even though I think she is really nice and funny and all-around wonderful, that I deep down have to hate her just a little because she has what I know in my heart is rightfully mine, even if I was too slow to admit it to myself.
Simply heartbreaking. Can't wait to read more!
Date: January 13, 2007 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1
AH! Keep going! Sigh. This needs to happen.
Not only do I like the story here (and where it seems to be going), but you did a lovely job writing it. This line in particular:
When she felt her throat constricting, she would seek out his eyes from somewhere in the office, see the look, and for a minute she could breathe again.
... along with pieces of the preceding paragraph... I think this captures really well what is going through Pam's head.
Definitely looking foward to Jim's reaction!
Date: January 13, 2007 10:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Awe. Vulnerable Pam who finally says something? Yay!
Date: January 13, 2007 08:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooooh. So nice. Lovely cliffhanger. I love Pam's thoughts about Karen.
Date: January 13, 2007 07:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Way to go Pam! This made me all kinds of happy. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: January 13, 2007 12:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooooh!!! YOu know, I could SO see it happening like this - totally by "accident" in that it's not something that she plans to do. She just finally lets her guard down for a second and out it comes! Great work. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: January 12, 2007 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I would love to see this side of Pam, and more importantly, I would love to see Jim's reaction to this side of Pam...I can't wait for the next chapter!