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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2021 05:31 am Title: Chapter 5

Actually laughed out loud at Pam hitting Roy with the frying pan to stop him from tickling her, in particular in light of the fact that this would almost certainly be Jenna Fischer's reaction.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2021 05:29 am Title: Chapter 4

Kinda glad to see Karen and Pam get their comeuppance. And Jim's excitement about the snow is remarkably prescient.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2021 05:28 am Title: Chapter 3

Very easy to picture David Wallace delivering this dialogue, and Jim as the stand-in groom has stuck with me.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2021 05:26 am Title: Chapter 2

I think of Jim's amusement at clamping Michael's face in the George Foreman grill every time I watch The Injury. Congratulations, snoznoodle. You win.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 09, 2021 05:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Pam and Karen pranking Jim stings, but it's still funny every time.

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hmm, good review, good review, good review...

O mighty Snoznoodle, who has graced my presence with her writing. You have once again bestowed upon me the gift of uncontrollable giggling and a sense of irony (because the Andy/Angela thing came true). Please continue writing, O great one, and place me, JamFan4, in a scene involving Jim Halpert.

P.S., You are awesome. =D

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 2

Stanley: Michael cracks me up. Sometimes I wish I didn’t have to go home. Damn children.

That one actually made me laugh out loud.

Why would you of all people ruin a good JAM moment? Oh dear...

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Pam and Roy are leaning on the side of a deserted desk, eating a sandwich and talking happily.

Out of nowhere, Jim appears and immediately slams his fist into Roy’s jaw, causing him to fall back, legs first, behind the desk and land unconsciously on the floor.

Pam watches unemotionally before finally saying, "about time!" and jumping into Jim’s arms.

^Favorite.
But all of these are hilarious, honestly. Favorite pairing = Michael/Toby. Moby? Tichael? Tobichael? Michoby?

Reviewer: StrawberryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Very funny!  My favorite line:

Pam: I’m in love with you Jim.

 

Jim: Ha ha! Good luck with that.

 

I can't stop laughing over that one! 

Keep up the good work! :)

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 09:13 am Title: Chapter 5

Wow.  I just caught up to this and it's like The Office on crack.  I have to admit, though, I totally giggle every time Pam and Karen pull a kitchen prank on Jim.  And Pam & Jim's "scheduled" argument?  Nice.  This is quite funny and weird. 

Watch some of your grammar and wording, though, i.e., I don't know what you're thinking, Jim.  (It's you're, not your -- I noticed this a couple times throughout the story.)  Sometimes these little things can be distracting.  Other than that -- well -- keep up the crazy.  Hee.

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 07:06 am Title: Chapter 5

I am confused by this:

“Yeah me too actually. Well… guess we’ll have to do this again some time.” He says smiling at her. In unison, they turn to the camera and say: “Don’t miss us! We’ll be back in six weeks so you can continue to see us avoiding each other! Here on NBC.”

 

I thought this was a story about things that WON'T happen.   And that seems to happen with alarming regularity.  

 As always, thanks for the laugh.....

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 07:34 am Title: Chapter 4

my schools mascot is a (game)cock. Maybe that is what Dwight thought hemeant. Just showing school pride! GO COCKS!

I can imagine I am in the kitchen making out with Jim. That makes me happy. I have to just daydream about that during class. Jiiiiiiiiiimmmmmmmmmm.

I am loving these though. Hilarious! Now class. That isn't as much fun.

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 12:13 am Title: Chapter 3

I haven't even finished reading this and already I just want to beg you to please continue these forever, because I am dying laughing.

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2007 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

 Jim: Okay. Yep that worked. Totally over you now

I love that line!  It was incredible, i nearly doubled over in laughter!  Please continue these, ilove them!!!  I find all of hte chapters hilarious, I am really looking forward to what you come up with next.  I think that the whole Jim/Pam/Dwight thing was the funniest....I'll be waiting to see if you can top it!  and you don't need blackmail,  I love this story and will always gladly review it (but I also LOVE Jim so...)



Author's Response: Lol thanks! yeh Im pretty proud of that line I have to admit. Well good news, I love writing them so yeh expect more!

Reviewer: Melissa Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2007 07:41 am Title: Chapter 1

How refreshing to come here and read something just hysterically, laugh out loud funny!  Loved it!!!  By the time I hit the third "____ and ____ are in the kitchen.  Making out."  I just lost it!!  I have to admit, as much as I love Jim, I kind of liked Karen and Pam teaming up against him, it was slightly satisfying in some weird way :-)  And having Dwight involved in the last one, that was great! 

I would love to see more :-D

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

I loved this chapter!  I hope you continue!  I laughed out loud at almost every one of these.  I also loved the Jim and Pam one....seriously that would be like the funniest way to make them get together! (I do realize it would never happen that way)

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think that was the first thing I read on here that actually made me laugh!  Which is weird since the Office is a comedy and all.  And I hope your not right about that last one!

Reviewer: Peskipiksi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 10:03 am Title: Chapter 1

I thought it was funny!  I especially liked Pam and Karen picking on Jim.

Reviewer: Lucy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 09:43 am Title: Chapter 1

This was incomprehensible.


Author's Response: Uhh... thanks?

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