Reviews For Growth Is An Erratic Forward Movement
Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 11:19 pm Title: Jim
Date: March 06, 2007 11:19 pm Title: Jim
Ha! Love the title of the list and every little thing on it! Especially number 3, 7, 9, and 10. Oh, #10 makes my heart ache.
Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 11:00 pm Title: Jim
Date: March 06, 2007 11:00 pm Title: Jim
GAH!!
I think that I love Jim's list.
In an earlier chapter, I like that you mentioned how he had just decided to flat out ignore her, game over. That was really harsh, but it struck home.
Thanks so much.
cheers.
--Lex
Reviewer: Treble Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Jim
Date: March 06, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Jim
I really loved this chapter. So many fics have tried to explain Jim's pov and you summed it all right here. It just works. Nicely done.