Reviews For Awake
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Reviewer: Muggins Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Sensitive Roy! Always a shocker. Trying to put these thoughtful words inside his neanderthal body was difficult for me until I got into the groove. An interesting groove - he can't articulate the complex thoughts that are ruining his life. On reread, I was glad to see you never have him actually speak aloud any of these thoughts. I think he would be incapable of it.

Reviewer: kellybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2006 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it. Crass as he is, I've certainly got a soft spot for Roy.

Well written and melancholy...

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2006 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a beautiful Roy POV. I was scared to read it, but somehow loved every part, especially: You can’t even begin to figure her out anymore. It really struck a chord with me. Roy loves her so much, but just can't quite be that guy.

Reviewer: janelle Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2006 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

poor roy. poor pam. poor jim. :(   very well written!  at least now we know it won't turn out that way. nobody deserves to be in a marraige without love, even roy

Reviewer: kate Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

this is absolutely amazing!! i'm crying! lol

i used to think that roy was a jerk; but now after re-watching some episodes, i've realized that he isn't a jerk. this story really captures roy's good sensitive side that i really think he has. simply beautiful! great work!

Reviewer: justy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2006 03:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww. Great. Now I feel bad for Roy.

This was beautiful, I liked the whole poking him and wanting to talk thing, that was adorable. heee!

Reviewer: Willow Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2006 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this broke my heart.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2006 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That is incredibly sad, but so well written. You certainly made me empathize with Roy.

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I really felt sorry for Roy (but I still want Jim and Pam together!)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2006 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was so well done that I ended up feeling sorry for Roy, and I never thought I would do that! Great story.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2006 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

I remembered this story from months ago on ff.net. No one writes Roy-angst like you do.

Reviewer: princesslisa Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2006 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

So sad. What are you people doing to me? I really liked the image of Roy hearing Pam laugh and then seeing her with Jim's hand in her hair. Nice job!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2006 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I've read and commented on this before, but I wanted to say something again because it makes my stomach hurt. I ache for Roy and I ache for Pam and I want to cry for both of them. Beautiful, as usual.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2006 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

First, I love the second-person POV. It's like someone is making him admit all of this to himself. And I like fics that give Roy more dimension. Nice job :)

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